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Nov 21, 2007 5:44 PM CST relinquish
class
classclassLiverpool, Merseyside, England UK143 Threads 809 Posts
relinquish

and in the throes of victory
the hatred rages
deep within
the bottomless scarring
of pockmarked glorious conquests

and those vanquished
writhe in agonies
of yawning defeat
squirming endlessly
in the dread caverns of loss

it is only those at peace
who lie in happiness
having relinquished
both the glory of victory
and the misery of defeat
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Nov 21, 2007 5:50 PM CST relinquish
rwantin
rwantinrwantinRoyal Oak, Michigan USA17 Threads 8,924 Posts
tip hat Thought-provoking. Thank you sir.
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Nov 21, 2007 5:51 PM CST relinquish
jgspain63
jgspain63jgspain63Malaga, Andalusia Spain7 Threads 471 Posts
Beautifully written wine
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Nov 21, 2007 6:04 PM CST relinquish
Ambrose2007
Ambrose2007Ambrose2007BFE, South Dakota USA67 Threads 10 Polls 8,881 Posts
I rather liked that (affecting British accentlaugh). I think you expressed a deep truth there, Class.wine
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Nov 21, 2007 6:52 PM CST relinquish
class
classclassLiverpool, Merseyside, England UK143 Threads 809 Posts
don't think too much Robert it causes headachesdoh
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Nov 21, 2007 6:53 PM CST relinquish
class
classclassLiverpool, Merseyside, England UK143 Threads 809 Posts
oh my thank you blushing
and so are you
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Nov 21, 2007 6:54 PM CST relinquish
class
classclassLiverpool, Merseyside, England UK143 Threads 809 Posts
I say spiffing , what ho!

thanks ambrose
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Nov 21, 2007 8:13 PM CST relinquish
bajanblue
bajanbluebajanblueSpeightstown, Saint Peter Barbados344 Threads 1 Polls 3,724 Posts
some uncomforatable images and for some reason I kept reading it as the misery of victory and the glory of defeat. Dunno why.

Interesting.
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Nov 21, 2007 8:23 PM CST relinquish
rwantin
rwantinrwantinRoyal Oak, Michigan USA17 Threads 8,924 Posts
I always buy the 100-count bottles of Excedrin my friend. Particularly around the holidays...
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Nov 22, 2007 1:18 PM CST relinquish
class
classclassLiverpool, Merseyside, England UK143 Threads 809 Posts
I think when we have have eliminated
the concepts of glory or misery in defeat
or victory within ourselves we come to a
position where the shackles and limitations
of sense perceptions are thrown off.

hug
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