When I think of beauty ( Archived) (12)

Jan 10, 2008 1:05 AM CST When I think of beauty
girlnextdormouse
girlnextdormousegirlnextdormouseMarietta, Ohio USA34 Threads 544 Posts
(Just a poem I wrote. Thought it might help a few ladies feel a little bit prettier on a bad hair day.)

:)

When I think of beauty,
I think of…

I think of a girl with broken fingernails and dirty knees because she knew how to play instead of pose.
I think of a young lady with calluses on her hands, because she learned the value of hard work at a young age.
I think of stretch lines and drooping breasts from a woman who chose to give life, and sustain it.
When I think of beauty, I think of those who play for fun, work for food and love for free.
When I think of beauty,
I think of Mothers.
I think of me.

When I think of beauty,
I think of…
Gray hairs that glisten the reflection of experience.
I think of wrinkles that preach understanding.
I think of thinned skin, arthritic knuckles and varicose veins.
When I think of beauty,
I think of my elders.
And what I might be.

When I think of beauty,
I think of…
Ears that listen without interruption,
eyes that make contact,
lips that whisper reassurance.
I think of dark rings under eyes from sleepless nights, tending to sick children, and ill parents, and restless husbands, and injured pets.
When I think of beauty,
I think of compassion, and nurturance, and self-sacrifice.
I think of women who actually listen, instead of just waiting their turn to speak.

When I think of beauty,
I don’t think of tans, or of figures, or glamour, or shaved legs, or earrings.
I don’t think of bikinis or lingerie, or small waists, or pink toenails.

When I think of beauty, I think of bald women,
who lost all their hair,
to chemotherapy,
and kept on smiling.
I think of survivors.

When I think of beauty,
I don’t think of models, or celebrities, or fashion scenes, or pop stars.

I think of homeless girls that finally ask for help.
I think of adolescents that say no to peer pressure.
I think of single moms, that play diverse roles.
I think of housewives, that are called worthless for not working.
I think of grandmothers, that are left alone in nursing homes.
I think of uneducated women, who simply do the best they know how.
I think of average women everywhere that are overlooked as undesirable.

When I think of beauty,
I redefine the word.
Because the beauty I see,
doesn’t fit on a magazine or TV.
The beauty I see,
Fits in the hearts,
of women like you,
and women like me.
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Jan 10, 2008 1:14 AM CST When I think of beauty
Daniel4021
Daniel4021Daniel4021Somewhere, Tennessee USA157 Threads 8,986 Posts
Very beautiful.. thank you for sharing this hug
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Jan 10, 2008 1:21 AM CST When I think of beauty
UnluckyGuyinpa
UnluckyGuyinpaUnluckyGuyinpaTrenton, New Jersey USA1 Threads 137 Posts
If only more woman could see life through your eyes.
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Jan 10, 2008 1:31 AM CST When I think of beauty
Daniel4021
Daniel4021Daniel4021Somewhere, Tennessee USA157 Threads 8,986 Posts
Well spoken Pa..
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Jan 10, 2008 1:42 AM CST When I think of beauty
girl next door,your user name doesn't become you.Your writing from your heart and not common or ordinary.You have a special heart and supporting all of us with your poem is part of who you are as a person.You write with emotion and those writers are the ones that succeed in affecting people with their poetry.







Anyway well thought out poemcheering applause
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Jan 10, 2008 1:45 AM CST When I think of beauty
langleygirl
langleygirllangleygirlWestlock, Alberta Canada70 Threads 8,202 Posts
Wise words ........ that reflect the beauty of experience, compassion, love, patience, giving, joy, and sorrow - simply being real.
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Jan 10, 2008 2:25 AM CST When I think of beauty
GldDgs
GldDgsGldDgsWay Downeast, USA1 Threads 55 Posts
When I think of beauty,
I think of…

Grace Kelly
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Jan 10, 2008 3:24 AM CST When I think of beauty
Star1
Star1Star1Buckinghamshire, England UK5 Threads 61 Posts
Absolutely brilliant! You really summed it all up, thank you for sharing wave
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Jan 10, 2008 3:32 AM CST When I think of beauty
skimpydoo
skimpydooskimpydooDublin, Ireland170 Threads 3 Polls 4,805 Posts
Brilliant thats so true. I like it a lot thumbs up
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Jan 10, 2008 3:37 AM CST When I think of beauty
Midship
MidshipMidshipLimerick, Ireland16 Threads 927 Posts
Wow...Brilliant angel

True Talent!!! Thank you for sharing angel
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Jan 10, 2008 6:53 AM CST When I think of beauty
Scottishlass
ScottishlassScottishlassKnoxville, Tennessee USA491 Threads 23 Polls 3,324 Posts
absolutly beautiful only a beautiful heart could write this.

Thank you.
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Jan 10, 2008 7:05 AM CST When I think of beauty
bajanblue
bajanbluebajanblueSpeightstown, Saint Peter Barbados344 Threads 1 Polls 3,724 Posts
Exquisite. Thank you.
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