tears of a deadman ( Archived) (31)

Jul 20, 2008 8:43 PM CST tears of a deadman
zdeadmanwalking
zdeadmanwalkingzdeadmanwalkingbowling green, Kentucky USA235 Threads 3,011 Posts
one night you
ask your guardian angel
will i find true love
will i give them my heart
as they give me their heart


your angel didn't
say nothing
he just sat there
looking at you
with a tear in his eye

you ask your angel again
will i find true love
will i give them my heart
as they give me their heart



all your guardian angel
will say is
with a tear in his eye
i died for you
i chose you
to watch over
why couldn't you love me instead
why couldn't you give me your heart instead
why couldn't you love me
forever and ever
as i love you forever and ever
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Jul 20, 2008 8:44 PM CST tears of a deadman
Very nice poem.
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Jul 20, 2008 9:12 PM CST tears of a deadman
zdeadmanwalking
zdeadmanwalkingzdeadmanwalkingbowling green, Kentucky USA235 Threads 3,011 Posts
blushing bouquet
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Jul 20, 2008 10:40 PM CST tears of a deadman
StarliteFantazy
StarliteFantazyStarliteFantazyFantazyLand, Missouri USA33 Threads 2 Polls 3,243 Posts
very nice, thought provoking...........both of them

thanks for the memories and the tearshug
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Jul 20, 2008 10:49 PM CST tears of a deadman
zdeadmanwalking
zdeadmanwalkingzdeadmanwalkingbowling green, Kentucky USA235 Threads 3,011 Posts
StarliteFantazy: very nice, thought provoking...........both of them

thanks for the memories and the tears



confused why tears sad flower
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Jul 20, 2008 10:52 PM CST tears of a deadman
StarliteFantazy
StarliteFantazyStarliteFantazyFantazyLand, Missouri USA33 Threads 2 Polls 3,243 Posts
zdeadmanwalking: why tears



because they are well written and you can feel the heart in them for one
because they remind me of a past for two
and finally because they tell of how things should be ........but usually aren't ....well at least for me




good enough?uh oh lol
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Jul 20, 2008 11:20 PM CST tears of a deadman
zdeadmanwalking
zdeadmanwalkingzdeadmanwalkingbowling green, Kentucky USA235 Threads 3,011 Posts
sometimes we must not read with the heart
sometimes we must not see with the heart
but sometimes we must read with our soul
but sometimes we must see with our soul
for true love only lays within the soul

for if the love lays in the heart
when the heart stops beating
the love will die


but if the love lays in the soul
unlike the heart the soul does not die
for soul is eternal,for it never dies
for when the love lays in the soul
it will live through out eternity
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Jul 21, 2008 3:11 PM CST tears of a deadman
StarliteFantazy
StarliteFantazyStarliteFantazyFantazyLand, Missouri USA33 Threads 2 Polls 3,243 Posts
zdeadmanwalking: sometimes we must not read with the heart
sometimes we must not see with the heart
but sometimes we must read with our soul
but sometimes we must see with our soul
for true love only lays within the soul

for if the love lays in the heart
when the heart stops beating
the love will diebut if the love lays in the soul
unlike the heart the soul does not die
for soul is eternal,for it never dies
for when the love lays in the soul
it will live through out eternity




another one well done!
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Jul 21, 2008 4:46 PM CST tears of a deadman
zdeadmanwalking
zdeadmanwalkingzdeadmanwalkingbowling green, Kentucky USA235 Threads 3,011 Posts
blushing hug sad flower
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Jul 21, 2008 11:20 PM CST tears of a deadman
forgivenangel
forgivenangelforgivenangeljacksonville, USA1 Threads 238 Posts
thumbs down
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Jul 22, 2008 3:11 AM CST tears of a deadman
zdeadmanwalking
zdeadmanwalkingzdeadmanwalkingbowling green, Kentucky USA235 Threads 3,011 Posts
cheers
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