This is such a sweet one Daniel...I'm more of an observer and reader of the forums than a poster - but just wanted to let you know this poem is so beautiful and sweet. I always read your poetry and have enjoyed each one. thank you - keep up the nice work - some lucky lady will be yours some day, then you will lavish all your loving words on her...til then, I appreciate reading along.
This one actually almost made me melt! Sounds so perfect....It's one of those ones that you have to read it more then once to feel and recieve all it has to offer. The language of poetry has always been amazing. I love writing poetry/lyrics but never brave enough to post them on a thread.
Charli15695: This is such a sweet one Daniel...I'm more of an observer and reader of the forums than a poster - but just wanted to let you know this poem is so beautiful and sweet. I always read your poetry and have enjoyed each one. thank you - keep up the nice work - some lucky lady will be yours some day, then you will lavish all your loving words on her...til then, I appreciate reading along.
Thank you, I didn't know I had an admirer of my work.. very nice to hear that motivated you enough to post in here..
Shanmariee: This one actually almost made me melt! Sounds so perfect....It's one of those ones that you have to read it more then once to feel and recieve all it has to offer. The language of poetry has always been amazing. I love writing poetry/lyrics but never brave enough to post them on a thread.
Thank you Shan, I am moved that my poem touched you in a good way.. would you be brave enough to share som of your work with me in email? Perhaps I can help you feel better about sharing them
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how are you today
I want you to know I think of you
each and every day
Is there anything I can do
is there anything I can say
would you like to just hold eachother
would that help you feel special today
Know that you
can always come to me
my heart will always be open
for you to see
It's a lovely evening
look up in the sky
the stars are shinning bright
for you and I
See the Angels
as they dance
we are lost in love
and blissfull romance
Come to me my darling
rest your head on my chest
I love you my Angel
you are the very best..
By Daniel
09/03/08