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Oct 3, 2008 1:47 PM CST Need your attention !!!
zhkhan88
zhkhan88zhkhan88Torino, Piedmont Italy56 Threads 6 Polls 242 Posts
I have written an essay for undergraduate scholarship but i don't have much experience like to check my essay like professors or advisers. Because they know the psychology of their colleagues (Professors/scholarship team)

Thats why i want to take advice before submitting my essay...

I am applying for Bachelor of science in Environmental Architecture. My essay is for scholarship purpose expressing why do you feel, you are a good candidate for a scholarship and how will this scholarship help you to achieve your goal?

So if you are thinking to help my scholarship essay. Leave me a message and i will send you my written Essay. Then you can make correction/editing.

I will be thankful to you for this kindness.
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Oct 3, 2008 2:10 PM CST Need your attention !!!
riyablossom
riyablossomriyablossomsomewhere, Pennsylvania USA184 Threads 18 Polls 11,244 Posts
so sorry .. i cant find anyone to edit mine even ..dunno
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Oct 3, 2008 3:12 PM CST Need your attention !!!
trish123
trish123trish123Macclesfield, Cheshire, England UK177 Threads 4 Polls 13,724 Posts
I'll check them for you both if you like - at least I can give suggestions for english usage and if i pick up on anything else, we can discuss it - I do my cap and gown ceremony next week - cant wait to get the photos....
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Oct 3, 2008 3:16 PM CST Need your attention !!!
livinglarge
livinglargelivinglargein a good place, Kildare Ireland10 Threads 5,879 Posts
trish123: I'll check them for you both if you like - at least I can give suggestions for english usage and if i pick up on anything else, we can discuss it - I do my cap and gown ceremony next week - cant wait to get the photos....
Congratulations Trish applause applause applause
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Oct 3, 2008 3:18 PM CST Need your attention !!!
Hugz_n_Kissez
Hugz_n_KissezHugz_n_KissezSomeplace, Ontario Canada59 Threads 2 Polls 25,438 Posts
trish123: I'll check them for you both if you like - at least I can give suggestions for english usage and if i pick up on anything else, we can discuss it - I do my cap and gown ceremony next week - cant wait to get the photos....



WOOOOOO HOOOOOOOO....You'll have to put some pics on your profile so we can see them doll....wink applause cheering applause hug teddybear bouquet yay
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Oct 3, 2008 3:29 PM CST Need your attention !!!
trish123
trish123trish123Macclesfield, Cheshire, England UK177 Threads 4 Polls 13,724 Posts
Im so excited - it is on the 14th - then i will officially be able to put Trish BA when I sign anything - even though its social sciences, social sciences are considered an 'art' hahahaha - wish i could do it all again though and get B S'c - theres not that much difference really, the research methods are the same as those used in the practical sciences - its just a societal/academic thingy.......
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Oct 3, 2008 3:31 PM CST Need your attention !!!
Hugz_n_Kissez
Hugz_n_KissezHugz_n_KissezSomeplace, Ontario Canada59 Threads 2 Polls 25,438 Posts
trish123: Im so excited - it is on the 14th - then i will officially be able to put Trish BA when I sign anything - even though its social sciences, social sciences are considered an 'art' hahahaha - wish i could do it all again though and get B S'c - theres not that much difference really, the research methods are the same as those used in the practical sciences - its just a societal/academic thingy.......



Yeah I bet you are excited darlin...and you should be...that's a lot of hard work behind you!!!!!!


wave wink hug teddybear hug bouquet yay kiss
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Oct 3, 2008 3:35 PM CST Need your attention !!!
mastic55
mastic55mastic55Long Island, New York USA167 Threads 6,859 Posts
I got a little problem to and cant get anybody to look at it.rolling on the floor laughing
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Oct 3, 2008 3:39 PM CST Need your attention !!!
trish123
trish123trish123Macclesfield, Cheshire, England UK177 Threads 4 Polls 13,724 Posts
Well....... I have to admit, its something of an achievement - we have a thing here called an access course which is for older learners to gradually fold themselves into academia but....... when I signed up for this course, they figured I could do it without that access thing cos had done a couple of months of the access thingy a few yrs before - they were so wrong and it was totally so hard for me to get my head round - it was the struggle of all struggles in my entire life, it even took my mind of the direst of grief situations - and yet,,,,,,, Im here to tell the tale - hahaha, a couple of weeks and there will be some brill piccies to relate the tale.........
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Oct 3, 2008 4:02 PM CST Need your attention !!!
trish123
trish123trish123Macclesfield, Cheshire, England UK177 Threads 4 Polls 13,724 Posts
I hate exams with a vengeance - good on you for getting through what must have been one hell of a week teddybear bouquet hug hug hug wave
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Oct 3, 2008 4:05 PM CST Need your attention !!!
morgan5
morgan5morgan5chelmsford, Essex, England UK87 Threads 8,237 Posts
Good luck to you handshake
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Oct 3, 2008 4:05 PM CST Need your attention !!!
trish123
trish123trish123Macclesfield, Cheshire, England UK177 Threads 4 Polls 13,724 Posts
a guy, the husband of our psychology tutor, said in private conversation with me one day "why the hell did you do that course, you would have been better doing physics" - thats about the best measure i can come up with for how bloody happy i am that that whole thing is over with........
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Oct 3, 2008 4:06 PM CST Need your attention !!!
trish123
trish123trish123Macclesfield, Cheshire, England UK177 Threads 4 Polls 13,724 Posts
morgan5: Good luck to you


Hello Morgan, lovely to see you stranger hug
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Oct 3, 2008 4:10 PM CST Need your attention !!!
morgan5
morgan5morgan5chelmsford, Essex, England UK87 Threads 8,237 Posts
trish123: Hello Morgan, lovely to see you stranger
Hi trish hug look in but just not posting as much, hope your well
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Oct 3, 2008 4:11 PM CST Need your attention !!!
trish123
trish123trish123Macclesfield, Cheshire, England UK177 Threads 4 Polls 13,724 Posts
Top of the world me thanks Morgan - hope all is as good for you wave hug
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