I am

by claudyaBucharest, Muntenia, Romania

Sep 2010 449 Views 9 comments

I am..

I am a little star
On the blue sky
Who shines in the night.
I am a little bird
Who flys till the sky.
I am white rose in
A big garden of eden,
I am a human being
In this big world.

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Posted: Sep 2010

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agoodguy2havesuffolk, Virginia USASep 18, 2010

You are claudya...the prolific poetess from Romania. Short, sweet, to the point. Liked the purple too.

claudyaOPBucharest, Muntenia RomaniaSep 18, 2010

Thank Yo for u cute comment my friend

serpico12cardiff, Mid Glamorgan, Wales UKSep 18, 2010

REALLY FINE POEM...SHORT AND WELL WRITTEN

Ladyjjeast, Norfolk, England UKSep 18, 2010

Hi Claudya

Loved the meaning in your short and effective write

Thank you for sharing.

Ljj

PassionateArtistWilmington, North Carolina USASep 18, 2010

! I=Am ! HoW=Wonderful !

freeatlast64847Lanagan, Missouri USASep 18, 2010

Well done caudya! Kudos!

claudyaOPBucharest, Muntenia RomaniaSep 19, 2010

Thank u to all sweet poets here who posted comments hug for all and God bless u all!

Macduff5Newcastle, New South Wales AustraliaSep 19, 2010

Thanks Claudia,
I think this is the essence of a good poem...simple but profound.

RedexNorthumberland, England UKSep 19, 2010

You certainly are Claudya and a lovely one too

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