letting go

Everything just went dark;
I cant feel my heart beat;
My breathing is going down;
I hear people crying;
I try to scream;
But, I cant;
Why are people crying;
I cant feel my body now;
I’m totally numb;
My heart isn’t beating anymore;
I’m letting go;
I feel somebody push on my chest;
Somebody told me to go for the light;
They told me don’t fight;
I’m letting go;
My breathing has stopped;
A man in white said welcome home;
But I know I’m not home;
I asked him what happened;
And he said;
You let go;
~by: Hailey Marie Platt
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Posted: Sep 2010
About this poem:
i was depressed

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0rpheus
I was saddened to read this, especially from someone so young. However, it is very good and I hope that soon I will be reading more jubilant poems from yourself.
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