I hear the distant echo of a song I knew before, it hovers o'er the river I swam in days of yore, when enclosed me only sunshine and all the world was mine, 'fore penury got its grip on me in the dark'ning veil of time
I hear the distant echo of a song I knew before, it plays in attic treasure chests my mind loved to explore, when diamond chips and pirate ships abounded on the main, 'fore my childhood dreams cried mutiny now no mystery remains
I hear the distant echo of a song I knew before, it swings on oak tree pendulums I tied before the war 'tween a young boy's dreams of flying and an old man's hopes of dying, and with time's speed multiplying 'til the clock tic tocs no more
I hear the distant echo of a song I knew before, so I'll ramble on and sing my song and regard not nevermore
Hi, morozova, 'tween a young boy's dreams of flying and an old man's hopes of dying, I could feel the breeze from the raven's wings. Nice ramble! Keep the poems singing!
jeddah12singapore, Central Singapore SingaporeOct 1, 2010
i like this one sir,very nice,it echos in my brain,,,i llove the read,ty for sharing
morozovaOPDublin, IrelandOct 1, 2010
Thanks gnj. No more poetry for a while. My novel is using all my brain cells
morozovaOPDublin, IrelandOct 1, 2010
Thank you too Jeddah. Glad I posted it
beautifulyouNew York, USAOct 1, 2010
Haunting, and deeply moving!
Ty for sharing.
It's nice to meet you morozova
morozovaOPDublin, IrelandOct 1, 2010
Thanks Beautiful you, and nice to meet you. Fine praise indeed from one so accomplished. don’t play proud; just say it out loud whatever's in your heart, today. - beautiful and unforgettable
johntheraven1oklahoma city, Oklahoma USAOct 1, 2010
very nice brother good poem
morozovaOPDublin, IrelandOct 1, 2010
Aw thanks John. Nice to meet you
SummervanillaMexico, Mexico City MexicoOct 1, 2010
A wonderful poem: triste, aun maravilloso!
morozovaOPDublin, IrelandOct 1, 2010
again, , thank you so much
ntm72brownsville, Texas USAOct 1, 2010
I have heard that distant echo. Sometimes you just cannot ignore it. I loved your poem. My favorite line is...it plays in attic treasure chests my mind loved to explore. The reason for this is my grandmother used to have alot of treasures in her attic.I used to hide up there every chance i could. Good job. You are a wonderful poet.
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'tween a young boy's dreams of flying and an old man's hopes of dying, I could feel the breeze from the raven's wings. Nice ramble! Keep the poems singing!
Ty for sharing.
It's nice to meet you morozova
whatever's in your heart,
today. - beautiful and unforgettable
ntm72