money makes pain

by sabeelcochin,kerala., Kerala, India

Aug 2009 607 Views 10 comments

money makes pain...

We need money to live better
Someone lives for money
And others living in money
Others are not aware about money
Someone kills and someone killed for it
And started war only for this
Finally every one goes to end
Which cannot stop by money?
So money will make more pain…

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Posted: Aug 2009

About this poem:

its not good to live only for money...

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Comments (10)

BentleeSmith Falls, Ontario CanadaAug 17, 2009

Mammon, the root of all evil! Good words Sabeel:)

HotrodLarrysSt. Joseph, Missouri USAAug 17, 2009

Agreed, Stable words, yes Bentlee, Root of all evils

sabeelOPcochin,kerala., Kerala IndiaAug 17, 2009

dear poet bentlee.
thank you for your kind words..
your words are right"the root of all evil!"
sabeel.

sabeelOPcochin,kerala., Kerala IndiaAug 17, 2009

dear poet..HotrodLarrys
thank you very much for your comment..
i honour it..
sabeel.

poetengineerriyadh, Ar Riyad Saudi ArabiaAug 18, 2009

right logic words sabeel , thanks for ur share

andrew149Southbourne, nr.Bournemouth, Dorset, England UKAug 18, 2009

Thankyou for your poem Sabeel, truthful in meaning, but i believe also that in the right hands it can be a powerful tool to do good with. Take care my friend and keep the poetry coming, I might not comment every time but i do read. regards, Andrew149

sabeelOPcochin,kerala., Kerala IndiaAug 19, 2009

dear poet poetengineer..
i like your comment on my poems...
you like that logic in this poem ? thank you..
sabeel.