you must be a looser

by sabeelcochin,kerala., Kerala, India

Aug 2009 830 Views 16 comments

you must be a looser

If any one think about pure love
And like to be loved very much
He or she must be a looser
Without loosing something
We never get real things
That ever makes happy in our life
If you are a selfish one
Make sure, you never get
A pure love,
Nobody likes you very much
Sometimes they use you as media
To fulfill their needs...
So ready to loose something
If you really want to love…

~ ~ ~ ~ ~

Posted: Aug 2009

About this poem:

i think so...what do you think...?

Post Comment

Comments (16)

andrew149Southbourne, nr.Bournemouth, Dorset, England UKAug 26, 2009

Dear poet sabeel, good to see you back my friend, I know if you really want something then you must lose something too. very true words....Andrew

sabeelOPcochin,kerala., Kerala IndiaAug 26, 2009

dear poet andrew149,
i am so happy , dear poet.
i like your true words to comment my poems and others..
thank you very much..
sabeel.

IirisEspoo, Southern Finland FinlandAug 26, 2009

Mmmm, such a wise words...
Wise and deep...
Keep this way :)
I guess you know exactly what is love :)

BentleeSmith Falls, Ontario CanadaAug 26, 2009

Hi Sabeel, if I may, a couple a things loose an ego, loose an attitude, loose a chip off the shoulder, an maybe gain your heart an another one:) Good to see you:) ty for your share of wisdom.

gypsyheartSouth coast of KwaZulu Natal, KwaZulu-Natal South AfricaAug 27, 2009

i think....you have to sow seeds of love first....to reap the flowers of love.Thanks for sharing your version sabeel

sabeelOPcochin,kerala., Kerala IndiaAug 27, 2009

dear poet gypsyheart ,

i am so happy to read your words,
i can see your kind heart to comment freely..
sabeel.

sabeelOPcochin,kerala., Kerala IndiaAug 27, 2009

dear poet,Bentlee,

its is the best moment to see your comments on my poems.
hearty welcome..
sabeel.

sabeelOPcochin,kerala., Kerala IndiaAug 27, 2009

dear poet,Iiris

first of all, i am very happy to continue here with the good comments of best poets of this forum.
sabeel.

sshoreHyderabad, Telangana IndiaOct 18, 2009

you may be right

sshoreHyderabad, Telangana IndiaOct 18, 2009

sabeel where are you?
where where cant find you on vacation??

gypsyheartSouth coast of KwaZulu Natal, KwaZulu-Natal South AfricaOct 18, 2009

Yes Sabeel where are you friend???We miss you

sabeelOPcochin,kerala., Kerala IndiaOct 22, 2009

my dear sister GYPSYHEART and dear poet shhores,
it was because of my transfer to a village in kerala , i failed to reach near to connect you.....
really i missed you too,
thanks for care...
sabeel.

gypsyheartSouth coast of KwaZulu Natal, KwaZulu-Natal South AfricaOct 22, 2009

Welcome back Sabeel

sabeelOPcochin,kerala., Kerala IndiaOct 24, 2009

thank you dear sister , poet, gypsyheart..
sabeel.