He drove me away from him With his rejection And his needs And his wants And he kept me in my place.
He made promises to me Which could never be kept Which demonstrated my inadequecies Which demonstrated my needs Which demonstrated my wants Which demonstrated my hurt.
Gone were the days of laughter And playing And planning For the future. As there was no real future based on mistrust. As there was no real future based on need. As there was no real future based on want.
And so, The younger man So happily, Found a younger woman, So he could become the older man.
He escaped.
The Even Younger Man
He hurt me... Emotionally... Unintentionally...
He drove me away from him With his rejection Yet he kept me as his friend.
He made unspoken promises to me Of friendship Of fun times Of future times Which could never be kept Which demonstrated my inadequecies Which demonstrated my needs Which demonstrated my wants Which demonstrated my hurt.
Gone were the days of laughter And playing And tickling matches And trips to the movies And camping And bar-b-ques And children playing. As there was no real future based on mistrust. As there was no real future based on need. As there was no real future based on want.
And so, The younger man So happily, Continued his search, For his younger woman.
He searched.
He escaped.
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Posted: Aug 2009
About this poem:
Finally I understand... I am not searching for a man, just looking for a future, where one may be part of it.
thecarpenterOrange, New South Wales AustraliaAug 29, 2009
Interesting style. I hope you find the future you are looking for.
wannabeauthorOPTaree, New South Wales AustraliaAug 30, 2009
Thankyou... I was experimenting with a change in style... These are the two hurts I have... both with younger men... one my ex, and the other a great guy I met from here...
Now I need someone who is older and wiser to ... (well we'll just see what happens)
gypsyheartSouth coast of KwaZulu Natal, KwaZulu-Natal South AfricaSep 5, 2009
You really have a nice writing style wannabeauthor...be glad both escaped-you have won in the end
wannabeauthorOPTaree, New South Wales AustraliaSep 19, 2009
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I was experimenting with a change in style...
These are the two hurts I have... both with younger men... one my ex, and the other a great guy I met from here...
Now I need someone who is older and wiser to ... (well we'll just see what happens)