I Feel Like

When I look at you, I feel like looking at a full moon on the day of no moon; as your face resembles the glowing moon!

When I think of you, I feel like having a gulp of cold water standing in a hot dessert under the hot Sun!

When I dream about you, I feel like living in a world that is made of white marble!

When I think of owning you, I feel like starting a Pearl business; as each and every drop of your sweat resembles & equals a pearl!

Oh! my dear Angelic beauty, you please come to me like a dew drop falling down from the tip of a baby leaf hanging to the edge of a tree standing on the waterside of a lake for making the seed of love sowed at the bottom of my heart germinate and blossom with fragrant flowers!!!!!!
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Posted: Mar 2011
About this poem:
It is all about a girl whom I am dreaming about. I wrote all the lines posted here with a mind of imagination as I do not know who that girl is!

The inspiration behind all my writings is beauty of Women and the Nature! I like both women and the Nature as both looks one and the same from my eyes. By the by, this is my first posting here.

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niah9online today!
Yes makusri......this is your first posting here... but I remember you anyway....I always believe we can only write from the heart...we know them...and you have already admitted it....I hope you get to know her better....she won't stand a chance with words in phrases like this.....and it's a great first write too...welcome....Niahgrin teddybear
makusri
Thank you so much for the comment. I too remember you niah. I will write some more lines here in due course of time.
gnj4u
Hi, makusri,
Aside from the of owning you phrase, I Feel Like does come to me like a dew drop falling down from the tip of a baby leaf hanging.. May the poet's words continue to germinate and blossom with fragrant flowers!
makusri
@gnj4u

Thank you so much!
Look forward for my new lines soon....
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