Hi, xjennxox, There is so much despair that must be overcome in this rain rain. Although I had always thought of tears as the body's way of releasing pain, allowing it to flow out into the universe, and rain as a cleansing, renewing, sustaining force of nature, Poison tears stream down my face... paints a Crimson picture of the destructive nature of this great pain.
In the lines My heart beats at a steady pace As I try to stand again; Alone and standing in the rain, your poem conveys an inner strength, standing, against such pain. At the end of each day, may we all be standing. Thank you for sharing.
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There is so much despair that must be overcome in this rain rain. Although I had always thought of tears as the body's way of releasing pain, allowing it to flow out into the universe, and rain as a cleansing, renewing, sustaining force of nature, Poison tears stream down my face... paints a Crimson picture of the destructive nature of this great pain.
In the lines My heart beats at a steady pace As I try to stand again; Alone and standing in the rain, your poem conveys an inner strength, standing, against such pain. At the end of each day, may we all be standing. Thank you for sharing.