Idon’t know Why some say that the horse is a noble animal, the pigeon is beautiful And why no vulture dwells in any person’s cage I wonder why the clover is interior to alfalfa One must wash eyes, look differently to things words must be washed The word must be wind itself, the word must be the rain itself
One must shut umbrellas One must walk in the rain One must carry the thought, the recollection in the rain One must go walk in the rain with all the townsfolk One must see friends in the rain One must search love in the rain One must sleep with a woman in the rain One must play in the rain One must write, talk and plant lotus flowers in the rain Life is repeated wetting Life is swimming in the pond of present...
I'm sending you one of my favorite Persian poems that I like very much, but I know that when poetry is translated to another language, it may not transfer the feelings properly. Of course this type of poetry is very different and it has its own fans, so I hope everybody likes it. I am fond of reading this poem because it expresses everything that is around us in a very simple and understandable way. When reading it, it makes me think about the world, the creator and all creatures differently, with a better perspective.
I am truly sorry Kamrani, but you have flood the site with poems that are not yours. People who have wriiten get knocked off the page and I must confess to you, so many poems will be skipped and not read at all, for you are not being fair to everyone else here. I wish you well my friend and would willing read a poem you have written yourself.
KamraniOPTehran, IranJul 6, 2011
Hi dear Redex,
Thanks for your advise..
More and less im agree with u, well after posting, i thought it was better if i posted a short part of poem and put the whole poem link for someone who like it. Ok just let have another opinion then i can do that,bcz the friends opinions are deffrent..
Im new to this online things also so poor in English..actually im learning English and online communicate by fun..and im hope to send my own first poem soon.. before that i thought maybe its useful if i interduce some more Iranian poets to friends.
Sorry a bout my poor English ..well i used to learn so much by my mistakes. Thanks for your instructive comment.
KamraniOPTehran, IranJul 6, 2011
andrew,
Hi dear friend from Bournemouth I have been in Bournemouth for more than 6 month a bout 30 years a go, and i have plan to come there for another 6 month to learn English.
Thanks for your so useful advise..yes that's a good idea.
Hi, Kamrani, Welcome to Poet's Corner. It was kind of andrew149 to offer posting advice. We are all students of poetic communication and learn as we go. Thank you for taking the time to expose us to your favorite Iranian poets. I look forward to reading your installments of Sohrab Sepehri's THE WATER'S FOOTSTEPS.
KamraniOPTehran, IranJul 10, 2011
gnj4u,
Hi dear friend..Thank you so much for your kind words.
KamraniOPTehran, IranJul 10, 2011
agoodguy,
Hi dear friend..Thank you for your fun kind comment on Part(1) of this poem..well i decided to resend it by one single post and put the whole poem link for the friends who like to read. Thanks so much for the comment.
RedexNorthumberland, England UKJul 10, 2011
I am glad to see you back, I have read and soaked this one in and it is quite beautiful, The last line is so summing up of everything. thankyou for sharing and yes I will follow the link to read more
KamraniOPTehran, IranJul 10, 2011
@Redex
Thank you so much..i got lesson from you and im so happy you like the poem and i will try to write my first poem too. Have a nice day.
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I wish you well my friend and would willing read a poem you have written yourself.
Thanks for your advise..
More and less im agree with u, well after posting, i thought it was better if i posted a short part of poem and put the whole poem link for someone who like it.
Ok just let have another opinion then i can do that,bcz the friends opinions are deffrent..
Im new to this online things also so poor in English..actually im learning English and online communicate by fun..and im hope to send my own first poem soon.. before that i thought maybe its useful if i interduce some more Iranian poets to friends.
Sorry a bout my poor English ..well i used to learn so much by my mistakes.
Thanks for your instructive comment.
Hi dear friend from Bournemouth
I have been in Bournemouth for more than 6 month a bout 30 years a go, and i have plan to come there for another 6 month to learn English.
Thanks for your so useful advise..yes that's a good idea.
Welcome to Poet's Corner. It was kind of andrew149 to offer posting advice. We are all students of poetic communication and learn as we go. Thank you for taking the time to expose us to your favorite Iranian poets. I look forward to reading your installments of Sohrab Sepehri's THE WATER'S FOOTSTEPS.
Hi dear friend..Thank you so much for your kind words.
Hi dear friend..Thank you for your fun kind comment on Part(1) of this poem..well i decided to resend it by one single post and put the whole poem link for the friends who like to read.
Thanks so much for the comment.
Thank you so much..i got lesson from you and im so happy you like the poem and i will try to write my first poem too.
Have a nice day.