A Soul T Keep

by Unknown

Jul 2011 309 Views 7 comments

A Soul T Keep

Author: Unknown

Have my soul to keep
Secure my heart in a conscious
Remember that angels see every droplet of blood sacrificed
Our thoughts sprout golden wings to fly beyond the windows of a breathing cage
So let no demons lead you
Allow my love to light the dim and darkend places
A soul to keep near as we travail the path of life before the birth to come after the mighty mountains crumble and fade

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Posted: Jul 2011

About this poem:

This was written some time ago when I was writing and experimenting with music and poetic themes.....I have produced it here from memory maybe making it slightly different from the original......

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andrew149Southbourne, nr.Bournemouth, Dorset, England UKJul 12, 2011

Hi Jaguar, I enjoyed it, it is a bit different, but made sense....Welcome to Poets Corner, I hope you enjoy it here....Keep writing....Andrew xxx

jaguar41OPLondon, Greater London, England UKJul 12, 2011

Thanks for the positive response.....maybe i'll remember others or write new pieces.......

jaguar41OPLondon, Greater London, England UKJul 12, 2011

PS. The first one had a slight mistake in it.....spot it and i'll give you a crisp new nine pound note

andrew149Southbourne, nr.Bournemouth, Dorset, England UKJul 12, 2011

Nah mate, don't go in for nine bob notes...lol...Andrew

jaguar41OPLondon, Greater London, England UKJul 12, 2011

Yeah the poem I read of yours is similar,but, opposite theme of some poor soul possibly succumbing to temptation.......liked it.....it was good

andrew149Southbourne, nr.Bournemouth, Dorset, England UKJul 12, 2011

Thanks Jaguar,...I'm sure you will have a great time here, it's easy to make friends here, and you will find most on here ready to encourage...Enjoy......Andrew

jaguar41OPLondon, Greater London, England UKJul 12, 2011

Yeah cool, I shall visit from time to time, checked out your second poem and yeah it sounds like life to me, I mean the meta narrative is very American and up beat in this country, especially with Conservative who admire that society, but the reality is life does have its struggles, to state the obvious, and we don't all want to dream the same materialistic, vain and empty clelbrity obssessed dream.....

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