AL DI LA MY LOVE

AL DE LA MY LOVE


You and I had everything calculated and planned
We were just following fate and its every command
Two souls were going to find forever in an unexpected land
And neither of us would dare to defy destiny’s demand

We were supposed to last a lifetime together no matter what
That was this man and his lady’s predetermined plot
No one could rattle our teacups or shake up the place
Not as long as two lovers had the other’s embrace

I recall adding and subtracting and then reaching a perfect sum
We were sitting on a settee having biscuits and sharing one glass of rum
We shared everything including time, smiles and each other’s past
But simply because a person says “forever” doesn’t mean it will last

Because you hit a rocky road or a curve at too great a speed
You died and I didn’t believe death could be so easily decreed
We were acting in haste while all the time we thought, devised and planned and sadly together we will never find that forever’s clandestine land
© 2011.….~ Phreepoetry….free cee!~
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Posted: Aug 2011
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I TOLD JUDY NOT TO GO IN THE CAR WITH GENE ON ACID, BUT SHE WENT...AND MY LOVER RETURNED IN PIECES

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jazzy75
sad flower fine poetry gets better with age.wine
pilgrimageoflove
Great poetry free.... it captures reality's dark side.
Poetnumber1
Dark poem,but a well synchronised one indeed,each writer has a different style to bring to the table,but yours is unique,keep up the good workapplause applause applause
marikia
Poetnumber 1 has a point: your style is outstanding in its uniqueness and you know it. I am very sorry for your lover, for your plans for together, for all the tragedies that happen in this world, and for our helplessness when confronted with pain of such immense proportions. Have nothing else to say, just let us suppose this is not the end of the world, but it might very well be! Cheers to you, Free!hug teddybear
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