HEAVEN'S HOARDS

HEAVEN’S HOARDS

All I believe is in Heaven there must be quite a crowd
All the earthly beings who refused to harm or sin
There are the heroes, the risk takers and the proud
Heaven probably already let fourteen trillion people

The line to get in must be universally long
And that’s only for the pious ones
The ones taken off the line are the ones never did wrong
Heaven is filled with souls who never used fist a rifle or guns

It’s taking people like days and days to finally enter
Unknowingly the line turned into a circle in shape
There was a circle and only 1200 fools who stood in the center
And on the floor there’s a sign that reads “do not go past this tape”

Man, I know the galaxy is giant and could be expanding every day
But that’s how big Heaven must be to cater to every resident
Then there’s the opposite where lakes are on fire and the ones who never stopped to pray
That place is called Hell and upon my arrival I will soon be voted president
© 2011.…..Phreepoetry ~free cee!~
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Posted: Aug 2011
About this poem:
BECAUSE TOMORROW IS SUNDAY BUT I DON'T KNOW IF IT'S SILENT OR NOISY

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Comments (1)

marikia
Very ingenious write and the irony fits in perfectly. When you mention the numbers of righteous ones, who have never sinned and are already fourteen trillion there angel with the line of more waiting for days and days to enter confused I think we already have paradise here heart wings - no need for the galaxy to expand: probably a few sinners like me and you doh are left waiting to be swept away and taken down to where we belong.sigh Count me among your supporters when you run for presidency! wink
Enjoyed very much, thank you for sharing! head banger dancing
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