I've grown tired of the vicious cycles ... of the do's and dont's the wrong's and right's I've lost the will to fight to stand against bliss with ignorance by myside to stand upon my own pride with nothing inside moving forward to crawl to walk to take flight the fact i should or shouldn't the woulds and coulds I didn't Thoughts that waver I've begun to lose count count of the endless mind numbing questions where they began, ongoing and end whether or not to relieve myself from jumping out this plane, building or cliff questioning wheres that next spliff? screeching the voices are that echo vibrate and torture the halls of my mind close my eyes to mysteries yet to find has me searching in disarray curious as to why you decided to stay thoughts of anger and disbelief to drown the misery in make believe to glance inwards instead of out the reality of my perception is what it's all about to stop lashing at others and find myself that these feelings wont bend nor fix themselves the dead the alive, the faithful the lies the suttle differences between you and i lets find a threshold of common ground where the clouds no longer blanket the skies where you and I can be alive ... I've grown tired of the vicious cycles
gypsyheartSouth coast of KwaZulu Natal, KwaZulu-Natal South AfricaSep 16, 2009
Really wise words inside your poem 3point - the vicious cycle of the analytical mind and then the release in the end
3pointOPLondon, Ontario CanadaSep 16, 2009
:D yea i thought I'd end it happy, i just liked the way the word "vicious" sounded and thought i should write a poem with it.
andrew149Southbourne, nr.Bournemouth, Dorset, England UKSep 16, 2009
I think you may have found your place, 3 point........here, thankyou for another good read.......andrew...
3pointOPLondon, Ontario CanadaSep 16, 2009
Thx alot andrew, I've always liked poems... never read a book in my life, but I love peoms lol... must be the fact there shorter, str8 to the point and powerful :D
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