fresh moments

Everyone should be given the chance to be new every minute,
Not labeled, limited and listed in catalogued classification.
Foolish words uttered yesterday are unsaid by the setting sun,
washed away by the new moon tides: fresh thoughts have already begun.
Release me from patterned opinion, let me be new; and i'll tear up the stagnant records i kept about you.
Everyone should be given the chance to be born again minute by minute,
The world isnt standing still nor anything in it.........
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Posted: Nov 2011
About this poem:
i met my father for the first time in twenty years. unfortunately i couldnt connect with him as he held judgements on me from family members from years ago. wont stop me trying to establish a relationship with him tho

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Ayhra
Nice writing. Thank you for sharing this. My best wishes shontavayous handshake
shontavayous
thank you Ayhra same to you. i will post more soon.
Fellsman
Hi shontavayous


A most interesting concept - if only we could tear up aspects of our past... I could think of a thousand things I wish I could delete from my past.

I wish you well in your attempts at reconcilliation with your father.


Best wishes

Bill cheers
shontavayous
thank you Bill.
We can't change the past, but we can certainly look at it with fresh eyes, thus in turn changing the effects of the past.
thanks again for your comment and i shall continue my connection journey.
all the best,
Jonny
moonontide
I love your line "to be new every minute" When we become aware that life is just moments we start to live in appreciation of who we are.We all have the capacity to be not so beatiful but
but!
Foolish words uttered yesterday are unsaid by the setting sun,
washed away by the new moon tides: fresh thoughts have already begun.
I think your Dad will see your beautiful you, as you will also tear up the past stagnant words.
Just great expression. I loved it. wine
Maxeen_1
fresh moments shontavayous
thankyou for sharing your write ..all the very best dear x..
How True your words...
Everyone should be given the chance to be born again minute by minute,The world isnt standing still nor anything in it....
hug teddybear angel
shontavayous
Thank you for the comments i appreciate the great sentiment. just working on being like a tree, all effected by its surroundings yet uneffected. After a storm, being limbed etc They still remain a tree. In challenging environments they adapt. I love nature it reminds me to just be a human be-ing, not to get caught up in the human do-ing so much.
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