broken hearted

like drops of rain
on a misty day
are the tears of my heart
since you ran away

like thunder in my mind
are the words
that you spoke
when in doing so
my heart you broke

shadows now stand
were once there stood light
as i let you go
without struggle or fight

yet sit here i wait
my eyes filled with tears
my heart filled with pain
and wishing you near

for your love was mine
and mine yours
yet to end it this way
did close many doors
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Posted: May 2012
About this poem:
i wrote this poem when i was 15,,,,
first love :)

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windyweatherly
Welcome to the world of so many loves xjonnyx. This is my first time to see you and boy did you introduce yourself with what we are all experiencing most of the times? That is if we lost more that we should...But very beautiful, specially if you wrote this when you were just barely born..Anyways it is beautiful Welcome.

Windy
CloudySky
Wow, very emotional and moving. Nicely written Xionnyx. Welcome to poetry corner. hug
xjonnyx
ty, was a boy in love, now a man looking for love.
xxx
xjonnyx
we are all budding poets.......................
wordsworth is one of my favorites :)
niah9
Lovely poem....heartfelt...is the best...Kathycool
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