sometimes

by Unknown

Oct 2009 333 Views 9 comments

sometimes

Author: Unknown

some times you hold on so tight that it slips right through your hands

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Posted: Oct 2009

About this poem:

the tighter you hold on the easier its going to all fall apart

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SunnnValletta, Majjistral MaltaOct 9, 2009

it does not slip away, it gets crashed dead

ohio19OPDayton, Ohio USAOct 9, 2009

if you dont like what you read then dont comment my stuff and dont read it i enjoy your comments and stuff but this is how i feel so you have no right to tell me that i am wrong thank you to all the people that really believe in me

SunnnValletta, Majjistral MaltaOct 9, 2009

If i have different opinion from yours, this does not authomatically makes any of us right or wrong.
Imagine now 20 more people write 20 opinions. Who will be on the wrong?

Comments are not a place for praises. Comments are free.

Keep writing, girl!

ohio19OPDayton, Ohio USAOct 9, 2009

thank you i just feel like my writing is more and more less effective to people and i dont want that

SunnnValletta, Majjistral MaltaOct 9, 2009

your writing burns

you go, girl!

sshoreHyderabad, Telangana IndiaOct 13, 2009

kara
you have stated a simple truth in a beautiful way
thankyou
bless you always
i love all your poems you know that..

so does Gypsyheart.
we all love your poetry
and we are all here for you as you are here for us
thankyou my dear litle sweet one