Be it with a husband or a wife or any other partner you chose for life Communications, is what makes and breaks the joined relations Afraid to talk, you might as well walk, open up and let it out So what if you both start to shout, bottle it up inside and seal it to die Let it out and find out what the other is about Don’t chose to turn your face away and hope for a better day Life doesn’t work that way, you might as well walk away Hiding from a pain will only make it increase not wane Be strong if you want to carry on and talk to each other Brother, sister, lover or mother or any significant other Please just talk to each other!
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Posted: Nov 2012
About this poem:
Wrote this one for a friend a few weeks ago who's marriage is going through a rough time
It is very sad when communication breakdowns between couples most especially; after all it is the basis of all relationships. I've always believed where communication is repressed, sadness abounds. Like you said...if you can't talk...might as well walk. Beautiful description of your subject; there's truth and lots of sentiments leaping out of your poem...loved it!
cumongirls2OPbishop auckland, Durham, England UKNov 11, 2012
Thanks orientalkoru Most of my past stuff has been as the result of personnal emotions or those of people close to me, not always good but it stirred me to scribble. My challenge was been able to share them and now I can do that, it's now to find other forms of insperation and i am struggling with that a little, kindda jealous of others on here that have that ability, i get the odd sentnce or verse but never seem to be complete...lol
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Most of my past stuff has been as the result of personnal emotions or those of people close to me, not always good but it stirred me to scribble.
My challenge was been able to share them and now I can do that,
it's now to find other forms of insperation and i am struggling with that a little, kindda jealous of others on here that have that ability, i get the odd sentnce or verse but never seem to be complete...lol