I like your poem, Ichliebedu - especially the 1st two lines . You are longing for real ( not virtual ! ) things - real closeness with the beloved one. Thank you for sharing ! Sky
beautifulyouNew York, USAFeb 7, 2013
Ty for this heartfelt expression of yourself It's quite lovely
Lovely write ichliebedu....really enjoy reading from you so deep!!! So real thanks 4 sharing:)
ichliebeduOPkolkata, West Bengal IndiaFeb 8, 2013
Raptur... Sky... beauti... cherry...
I currently lost my words as i said earlier girls are INSPIRATION & i admit i was once in LOVE Thank you all
windyweatherlySan Francisco, California USAFeb 15, 2013
If i could stare at you Dripping like dew If i could take you away A town away new
If i could live the night Could Only with you If i could wake up next Only beside you..
Well my friend, again, so simplistic yet loaded with all the true account of our simple yet realistic desires. Believe it or not, I wish I am always with the man I am in love with and be just as simple as this.
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BEAUTIFUL...
You are longing for real ( not virtual ! ) things - real closeness with the beloved one.
Thank you for sharing !
Sky
It's quite lovely
Sky...
beauti...
cherry...
I currently lost my words
as i said earlier girls are
INSPIRATION
&
i admit i was once in LOVE
Thank you all
Dripping like dew
If i could take you away
A town away new
If i could live the night
Could Only with you
If i could wake up next
Only beside you..
Well my friend, again, so simplistic yet loaded with all the true account of our simple yet realistic desires. Believe it or not, I wish I am always with the man I am in love with and be just as simple as this.
thanks
windy