...if i could

If i could stare at you
Dripping like dew
If i could take you away
A town away new

If i could live the night
Could Only with you
If i could wake up next
Only beside you...
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Posted: Feb 2013

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rapturecapture
Hi ichliebedu

BEAUTIFUL...wave
Skymore
I like your poem, Ichliebedu - especially the 1st two lines .
You are longing for real ( not virtual ! ) things - real closeness with the beloved one.
Thank you for sharing !teddybear
Skywave
beautifulyou
Ty for this heartfelt expression of yourself
It's quite lovely flower
cherryreggae
Lovely write ichliebedu....really enjoy reading from you so deep!!! So real thanks 4 sharing:)hug applause
ichliebedu
Raptur...
Sky...
beauti...
cherry...

I currently lost my words
as i said earlier girls are
INSPIRATION
&
i admit i was once in LOVE
Thank you all
windyweatherly
If i could stare at you
Dripping like dew
If i could take you away
A town away new

If i could live the night
Could Only with you
If i could wake up next
Only beside you..


Well my friend, again, so simplistic yet loaded with all the true account of our simple yet realistic desires. Believe it or not, I wish I am always with the man I am in love with and be just as simple as this.

thanks

windy
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