Life

Like sand; through a hand
It scatters on the wind.
Like leaves; Floating down
the fall will end.
The swirling, spinning,
ride can fill you up
inside.
Can't make it last,
love it now
before it's past.
Try to take control,
and it cuts like a
knife. Description of
the ever fragile
Life.
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Posted: Feb 2013

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niah9
lovely.....you expressed it so well.....countrygirlpoet.....loved it...Kathydancing
LadyMorgana60
Hi Countrygirlpoet wave

"Life" beautifully captured in your lovely poem..

Can't make it last,
love it now
before it's past.


Thanks for sharing..bouquet purple heart
madtat29
One of those big 4 letter words...good write...
Beachnit
Hi country
I like your poem. I myself am always going on about lifes short timeline. Actually have a tattoo to symbolise it a clock that reads 5 minutes to midnight and the latin Carpe Diem "sieze the day" on my heart. really liked the poem nice write. hug applause head banger banana dancing
Poetnumber1
What a lovely poem Country.Well done!handshake purple heart
beautifulyou
'love it now'


Words of wisdom. Ty rose
rapturecapture
Hi countrygirlpoet

Life is what you make of it.
Fragile it is.
Loved your poem it was a joy to read.
Thank you for your lovely thoughts hug bouquet angel
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