Emptiness

For some few years
myself, I set aside
withdrew from life
not one glimmer of light
total bareness of soul
one grain of sand
in vast desert lands
blown hither and tither
devastation taking over
an absolute waste of space
nothing left to give
just an empty vessel
not of any use
neither to man nor beast
tears of self pity fall
knowing I brought this about
then out of darkness
came a light, a ray
In poet's corner
I found a glimmer of hope
much more I found inspiration
saw in other's words
that alone I am not
that maybe, just maybe
I have something left to give
this I will let others judge
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Posted: Mar 2013
About this poem:
emptiness is a bad place to be

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kle76am
Shadow the Poet corner has been the glimmer of hope for us all or at least for most of us....so welcome to the Poetry Club on behalf of all the fellow writers in here........I see you got married to us.......and that's all good too...."all said for better or for worse"..........We will all fill the emptiness you will be overstuffed with love in here.handshake teddybear kiss
LadyMorgana60
Hi Shadow hug you are never alone here, we all feel empathy for those moments in times of emptiness..well penned dear Lady! bouquet gift
shadow1950
hi Kle ty for the welcome most heart warmingteddybear
shadow1950
ty Lady M glad you liked it I very nearly didn't post it
teddybear
Fellsman
Hi Shadow

Being alone and being lonely - are two completely different things: Loneliness is an insidious blight on anyone's life, which is why I always have believed that friendship is priceless and good friends are pearls beyond price.

Being alone by choice as and when the fancy takes us is quite another matter. This write, if it tells us anything, tells us that loneliness can be overcome and no one in these days of mass communication should ever feel isolated from the rest of society. Perhaps we all have something to give...

Kindest regards

Bill gift gift
heidi3626
that was really beautiful i really enjoyed it keep smiling my heartfelt wordsteddybear
Poetnumber1
Know that you're never alone Linda.By the way,nicely penned.comfort hug
shadow1950
ty bill trust all is well with youteddybear
Heidi hi and welome to Poet's corner ty
Dear poet ty you have all made me feel welcome here but more importantly I feel useful once again
I thank you all
hug teddybear
gnj4u
Hi, shadow1950,
I have something left to give... is a nice ending to a poem and a new beginning to life. Thanks for sharing.
shadow1950
ty G glad you enjoyed it
teddybear
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