Eternal Flame

Did you feel me love? That was not the breeze that lifted your hair and caressed your cheek... Did you see me love? The fleeting shadow out of the corner of your eye... Did you hear me love? When our song started playing while you were alone with your thoughts, and I whispered your name in the wind... Did you smell me love? When the scent you bought me fell and filled the room... I promised you my love forever, for eternity,and that is what I give you
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Posted: Apr 2013

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ladyjewelonline today!
Sweet and lovely, well doneteddybear
beautifulyou
Beautiful serena,

rose
shadow1950
this is very good Serena most enjoyed ty for the share
good pen teddybear bouquet hug wine
serena123
Wow! Thank you everyoneteddybear
ladyjewelonline today!
hug think we need another one from the love ladygrin
cafetwo2010
My doctor said I might need some serious medication after
reading this..kiss
666fly
BAD a**-YEAH MY BABYlips
666fly
MY LOVE I FELT EVERY GOD DAM THING U SAID I WAS THERE- O BABY MORE MORE ,....lips
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