Eternitarian Soul for Paloma

by shadow1950taunton, Somerset, England, UK

May 2013 441 Views 2 comments

Eternitarian Soul (for Paloma)

Author: shadow1950

Nacreous colours fill my senses
as the psiturism flows round me
touching the aeolian strings and
stirring the gossamer shroud

bringing ataraxia to my reverent
cosmogyral brings reminiscence
of days long gone by, yet I reach
my destination, my soul's safe haven

~ ~ ~ ~ ~

Posted: May 2013

About this poem:

tough one Paloma

Comments (2)

paloma66Manukau, Auckland New ZealandMay 10, 2013

Maybe shadow but you have risen to the challenge with aplomb and it has come up a winner,amazing in two stanzas you rounded it off.Its a highly commended write my dear.Beautiful,so beautiful,filled up my senses that has created a longing to set my soul on cosmogyral journey to reach its safe haven.Thank you dear girl.

shadow1950OPtaunton, Somerset, England UKMay 10, 2013

I love playing with words Paloma I often ask people to give me 10 or more words and try to knock them into a poem. Inspiration comes in many forms ty for your difficult and challenging words