SILENCE 0NLY TEARS AS I PRESS THE BLADE AGAINST MY PALE SKIN RED THE BL00D FL0WS FR0M THE W0UNDS ECH0ING MY INNER PAIN SATISFACTI0N AS I FEEL THE KNIFE SLICING INT0 ME I 0NLY DESERVE PAIN ANGUISH AS I REALIZE WHAT I'VE D0NE. I FEEL ACC0MPLISHMENT AS I GAZE AT THE MARKS 0P0N MY SKIN MY SKIN STARES PE0PLE ARE H0RRIFED D0NT UNDERSTAND WHY NEITHER D0 I
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Posted: Nov 2009
About this poem:
about this person who just cant seem to stop cutting depressed person
SoSo Sad this person can only find relief in this way. A walk in the forrest next felt cut, a weening off process slowely, redirection of pain felt and way to find relief.LOL
TheMickuijongbu, South KoreaNov 17, 2009
While reading this
i could feel the steel sliding threw my vains But i really don't feel any of the pain Its getting really cold And now my body folds Slumped over staring at my feet The blood trickles Down under my seat So I lay me down to rest Ill give it my best For when we meet Im sure it will be brief Since i know my place Living in hell Hell, It was fate But if your at the gate I hope to stain the stairs So you have to answer to all the glares And explain to all those souls Why my blood became so cold
It was beautiful. Keep writing hun, you are very good at it and i would love to read more.
Comments (2)
i could feel the steel sliding threw my vains
But i really don't feel any of the pain
Its getting really cold
And now my body folds
Slumped over staring at my feet
The blood trickles
Down under my seat
So I lay me down to rest
Ill give it my best
For when we meet
Im sure it will be brief
Since i know my place
Living in hell
Hell, It was fate
But if your at the gate
I hope to stain the stairs
So you have to answer to all the glares
And explain to all those souls
Why my blood became so cold
It was beautiful. Keep writing hun, you are very good at it and i would love to read more.
David