It was but a moment It had to be... I saw you and you saw me... I tried to speak No words came, Then you were gone But yet etched on my brain.
Don't know what it was all about, The fight, the quarrel, I think I heard the shout... But didn't even turn around As I let you walk out.
I felt you leave, rather than see And when the cold started seeping through Me I snuggled more into my coat of pride Bitter words and turmoil inside
Then a bell from far away Brought me Back to today I let it ring ding a ling Didn't care for anything.
Later that night Flashing lights, like a magnet drew me from bed And with words that sounded cold They said to me You're dead.
I couldn't scream... I couldn't speak The coat of pride that felt like fleece Now feels like a threadbare sheet.
It is now four years since that night But now it's time to say goodbye... Step away from the past, face the future With victory's torch burning bright I say to you my love... Goodbye.
Hi, diana_1, Letting go is definitely a complex process. Final goodbye, so filled with mixed emotions, takes on a life of its own until, as the poet states, one can Step away from the past, face the future. Thanks for sharing.
diana_1OPSan fernando, San Fernando Trinidad and TobagoJun 9, 2013
One wishes to go back and change so much, but one can't and simply, finally accepts that the future awaits, it is indeed time to move on...thank you for your kind words...
morgen90210singapore, Central Singapore SingaporeJun 9, 2013
very sad poem it should never be but nevertheless a heart pouring poem
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a beautiful write,,
our capacity to 'know when' to let go is pretty amazing.
With deep respect for you and what you've shared
Letting go is definitely a complex process. Final goodbye, so filled with mixed emotions, takes on a life of its own until, as the poet states, one can Step away from the past, face the future. Thanks for sharing.
it should never be
but nevertheless
a heart pouring poem