Other Me

by Unknown

Dec 2014 638 Views 16 comments

The Other Me

Author: Unknown

She is naughty,
She is nice,
She is a mix of rum
With a dash of spice...
Intoxicating and heady,
She could also be quite crazy,
Daring and adventurous,
She is no cowering mouse...
Zipping over trees,
Surfing on open seas,
Cruising on a motorcycle,
Should see her operate a kayak and
paddle...
Teasing and laughing
Always bubbling
Better than a vintage
Champagne...
Sarcastic sometimes,
Cruel never,
Loyal but fierce
Heart full of kindness...
Generous and sensitive,
Crying for puppies, kittens and
Movies,
Could scarce say no to a sad story...
This is the other me
The me that is hidden carefully....
The me I wish you'd see.

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Posted: Dec 2014

About this poem:

To share a bit of the other me

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Comments (16)

fjamesj9701DunkinDonuts, Florida USADec 19, 2014

So there are two awesome yous ? I can dig it Enjoyed reading... Much love and cheers... Jesse

SemsuSt.Johns, Saint John Antigua and BarbudaDec 19, 2014

It looks like somebody with wings, but still in Chains.....hmmmmm, don't we all have the other me, there in the scadow?

take care,

Rolf

diana_1OPSan fernando, San Fernando Trinidad and TobagoDec 19, 2014

Thanks Jesse, yes, she is awesome but a bit headstrong sometimes...

diana_1OPSan fernando, San Fernando Trinidad and TobagoDec 19, 2014

Yes Rolf, you're very astute, she is bound by propriety so that is why she hardly comes out except for when allowed a break from the toils and cares of life, then the chain slips off and she roams and laughs and is free. Thank you for reading and commenting...

ImagineLoveVenus, Montana USADec 19, 2014

A hug

for you today! What a great share, yes we are so many things in one body! Beautiful words and picture Diana.. take care poetess!!

beautifulyouNew York, USADec 19, 2014

hi diana,
i echo ImagineLove

we have so many aspects to our make up and so many possibilities within us that are yet to unfold

merry christmas, and thanks for your sharing

trurorobAlicante, Valencia SpainDec 20, 2014

Good read, enjoyed the rhythm and flow.
Rob

cafetwo2010Harford county, Maryland USADec 20, 2014

Love the other you..

Cafe

diana_1OPSan fernando, San Fernando Trinidad and TobagoDec 20, 2014

Hello Jade, thank you so much... hugs and kisses to you

diana_1OPSan fernando, San Fernando Trinidad and TobagoDec 20, 2014

Hi Beautiful, Yes absolutely right you are.... thanks for reading....

diana_1OPSan fernando, San Fernando Trinidad and TobagoDec 20, 2014

Thank you Rob, very much....nice to have you read and comment

diana_1OPSan fernando, San Fernando Trinidad and TobagoDec 20, 2014

Hi Jim, watch out for her though.... she may wander through your castle halls singing loudly and letting go all the prisoners at the first sob story... thank you for reading...