I would like to believe that: I am free I have a soul yet my spirit is bound trapped in the moments of yesterday swimming in the pains of my loss when I let go of my hopes my dreams and my aspirations yet as time goes by I am still here ensnared in the memories of where we were, what we did... why can't I find my way back to where I was before you captured my heart and yes, the sun may go dark the stars may stop flickering the moon might lose its luster and I... will still be alone... hoping waiting till my breath accounts for the last time.
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Posted: Sep 2015
About this poem:
just a thought...thanks all for your reads and comments
I just suddenly realized that our failure to acknowledge other's post and comments and or contribution is a sign of rudeness. So instead of my old way of thinking that it is ego induced goal to put me on top, the new format now do that for ourselves and I love it.
From now on, it is just right and very grateful for everyone to read and leave their comments and I want you all to know I deeply appreciate all your contributions.
Thank you again and I am so sorry for failing to acknowledge each and everyone of you on your comments.
Morgen, my admiration of your strength and ability to make things good and be hopeful is one thing I will never forget. I am equally pleased to be here still writing these silly thoughts of mine.
I am so please I inspired you to write another brilliant composition Jim. My pleasure to read you always and bringing back all my old writes. lol..I never thought I was in that bad position for so long.
cafetwo2010Harford county, Maryland USANov 8, 2016
Lindsy.. You've never been in a bad position from my point of view dear. This new format displays the poets at the end of everyones poem, so that allows us to catch up on great poems we might haved missed. I for one appreciate the great variety and unique personalties that shine forth in this medium. I love creative anything.. Cafe
Very nice write...even if our time passes and we want to reach out for it ... changes come and we can't do nothing about it..just accept it happened and breath of it all we can ....good or bad life continues. Enjoyed your write and thanks for sharing.
Comments (16)
but this doesn't sound like one
And there's a sweet taste when read
and only the gifted can craft like this....
Nice.to be back and read your poem ..thank you
I just suddenly realized that our failure to acknowledge other's post and comments and or contribution is a sign of rudeness. So instead of my old way of thinking that it is ego induced goal to put me on top, the new format now do that for ourselves and I love it.
From now on, it is just right and very grateful for everyone to read and leave their comments and I want you all to know I deeply appreciate all your contributions.
Thank you again and I am so sorry for failing to acknowledge each and everyone of you on your comments.
Thanks again and sorry for the long wait of my response.
You actually inspired me with this write.
Cafe
Thanks.
Thank you so much. Indeed, no one is really alone.
My appreciation as always. How are your cats?
You've never been in a bad position from my point
of view dear. This new format displays the poets
at the end of everyones poem, so that allows us
to catch up on great poems we might haved
missed. I for one appreciate the great variety and
unique personalties that shine forth in this medium.
I love creative anything..
Cafe