till I breath no more

I would like to believe
that: I am free
I have a soul
yet my spirit is bound
trapped in the moments
of yesterday
swimming in the pains
of my loss
when I let go of my hopes
my dreams and my aspirations
yet as time goes by
I am still here
ensnared in the memories
of where we were,
what we did...
why can't I find my way
back to where I was
before you captured my heart
and yes, the sun may go dark
the stars may stop flickering
the moon might lose its luster
and I...
will still be alone...
hoping
waiting
till my breath accounts
for the last time.
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Posted: Sep 2015
About this poem:
just a thought...thanks all for your reads and comments

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EyeLook4U
I really like this poem.great writing
ShakenHeart
Very nice much love talented soul that you are always smart always a wonderful read or discussion
morgen90210
I don't like reading sad ones
but this doesn't sound like one
And there's a sweet taste when read
and only the gifted can craft like this....

Nice.to be back and read your poem ..thank you
rusticbink
'Just A Thought'_- very well expressed. Thx4 ur work.
WILDANDREADY
NO ONE IS EVER REALLY ALONE LINDSYdancing TRAVIS WELL WRITTEN
rusticbink
Lindsy, I want to congratulate you on your 100 poem on poet's corner! cheers Rusty
lindsyjonesonline today!
Eyelook for you, thanks for your comment.

I just suddenly realized that our failure to acknowledge other's post and comments and or contribution is a sign of rudeness. So instead of my old way of thinking that it is ego induced goal to put me on top, the new format now do that for ourselves and I love it.

From now on, it is just right and very grateful for everyone to read and leave their comments and I want you all to know I deeply appreciate all your contributions.

Thank you again and I am so sorry for failing to acknowledge each and everyone of you on your comments.sad flower
lindsyjonesonline today!
Shaken, my appreciation for your encouraging remark. I am so pleased to hear from you that you do feel good of my presence and contribution here.

Thanks again and sorry for the long wait of my response.wave
cafetwo2010
Beautifully penned in great simplicity Lindsy.
You actually inspired me with this write.
teddybear
Cafe
lindsyjonesonline today!
Morgen, my admiration of your strength and ability to make things good and be hopeful is one thing I will never forget. I am equally pleased to be here still writing these silly thoughts of mine.

Thanks.wave
lindsyjonesonline today!
Rusti I am glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for your comment. wave
lindsyjonesonline today!
Travis, I am beginning to realize that it is our choice to be where we want to be and how we want to be.

Thank you so much. Indeed, no one is really alone.

My appreciation as always. How are your cats?wave
lindsyjonesonline today!
I am so please I inspired you to write another brilliant composition Jim. My pleasure to read you always and bringing back all my old writes. lol..I never thought I was in that bad position for so long.wave
cafetwo2010
Lindsy..
You've never been in a bad position from my point
of view dear. This new format displays the poets
at the end of everyones poem, so that allows us
to catch up on great poems we might haved
missed. I for one appreciate the great variety and
unique personalties that shine forth in this medium.
I love creative anything..
Cafe
wine
southmiami4321online today!
Very nice write...even if our time passes and we want to reach out for it ... changes come and we can't do nothing about it..just accept it happened and breath of it all we can ....good or bad life continues. Enjoyed your write and thanks for sharing.
lindsyjonesonline today!
Thanks as always Jim.
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