Should I

If i should die
will you mourn for me?
If i should act death
will you be sympathetic?

In the realm of eternal sleep
pain is removed,
tears to vapor,
and the body to clay.

Deep darkness has no sound,
no movement,
no remorse,
and light is swallowed whole.
Should I care?
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Posted: Jun 2013
About this poem:
this is about suicide and to those who left this life way too early.

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morgen90210
very light pose
yet can feel the kick
nice and unique
thank you
Dejavu4u
Tangerines,

Nicely done. Very deep. I can hear and feel the pain. Take care. Bless U!hug
tangerines
thank you for your kind wordshandshake
Arteeeonline today!
A sad and beautiful write tangerines.. I feel the sadness and pain in this write very touching! Thank you for sharing.. Vickie
rose daisy angel
tangerines
thanks vickie
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