nobody wins in war

nobody wins in war
but makes eveyone looser,
it begines with worry not worth.
war provok us to hide the truth
and lie will cover us.
no body can find, what we really need.
we forget the meaning of culture,love and affection.
we just know ,hungry , angry, and assault.
we are very proud to say more and more about knowledge.
but we couldnt understand other human.
who has with same feelings , emotions and needs.
we forget what, what we really needs
that may never hurt others.
every war begines when we fails to understand others.
open you heart, know others, talk frankly.
never allow our mind to fill with lie.
and let our new generation to live in peace.
not to hope more from others which we cannot give..
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Posted: Jun 2009
About this poem:
we must give the best to our new generation to be, rememberable.

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shhores
yes, lets hope...
poetengineer
yes sabeel , you are right , this one is full of realistic words , thanks for share
sabeel
dear poet,
we are sure that , no one like war. but every one gets its after effects in its very bad result.
lets hope for the good future without war.
sabeel.
sabeel
dear poet, poet engineer from saudi arabia.
i am sure you can easly understand the bad side of the wars.
it gives us worry only.
i like you comments and encouregements.
sabeel.
sabeel
hi, thanks for sharing
sabeel
spiritwalker
Hello from Canada
What a great job writing this I only hope that a lot of people understan what you are saying , you took the words out of my mouth young man I wish you and your country all the best and that the wars will end and that people will just get along and learn to respect each other take care
andrew149
Dear Poet Sabeel, some very wise words, I just wish that the politicans who disagree with each other realised them. One dreadful thing that keeps them going is they really think they can win, for they very rarely pay the cost,and, they believe the winners get to write the history books. Sometimes it's up to people like us to put them right after they have been written. Andrew
sabeel
dear poet, spirit walker,
we all need a world without war..
but we fails to get it ..
we can try for it..
sabeel.teddybear bouquet
sabeel
dear poet andrew 149,
the comments from a soldier about a poem on war,is intersting, i heard a news about a soldier wrote a book on his experience in war...

i hope you can write a poem on it..
sabeel.teddybear
andrew149
Sabeel, read YOUNG MAN, OLD SOLDIER.
The idea of war sickens me to the stomach, I was never in a war such as I have described in this poem, Mine was a different kind, when "the enemy" didn't wear uniforms and could be as young as 5, I hope I never have to pick up a gun again, But please read, I hope you enjoy it, that is what it is there for. Take care...Andrew
sabeel
THANK YOU DEAR POET ANDERW149.
SABEEL.cool
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