Clinched in this moment, and forever in this daze I touch her soft hands, as we take to the sky stage I feel her naked body, moving closer, becoming freely Heart, racing with passion, she starts to slowly tease me
We lay beneath the sheets, my body starts to tremble My sense for how she makes me feel, begins to re assemble Our minds are on a level term, the heat slowly drifts eternal With passion and love in this moment, ecstacy turns to inferno
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Posted: Nov 2009
About this poem:
Hi ALL.
A few thoughts into words.......Please tell me what you think and comment
Tiger_DanOPwarrington, Merseyside, England UKNov 21, 2009
Tiger_DanOPwarrington, Merseyside, England UKNov 30, 2009
Goddess72Northridge, California USANov 30, 2009
Ooh Daniel~~~
Tiger_DanOPwarrington, Merseyside, England UKNov 30, 2009
yes godess.........what are u thinking????
Goddess72Northridge, California USANov 30, 2009
Oh! I can't tell you that! Ha,Ha! This site is rated PG!
Tiger_DanOPwarrington, Merseyside, England UKDec 1, 2009
haha................glad you like it!!!
Tiger_DanOPwarrington, Merseyside, England UKNov 10, 2010
Funny how lookin bk on this site and thru my poems takes you to different stages that you have had......crazy stuff!
Swan87Syria, QatarNov 10, 2010
Nice , Hot Poem Tiger Liked it
Swan
RedexNorthumberland, England UKNov 10, 2010
Yes tiger welcome back nice poem, yes I do the same look back at what I did a year ago, we move on
niah9Auckland, New ZealandNov 10, 2010
Hi. I'm a newcomer to the site, but I know how I'm shocked when I look back on my poetry written a year ago....the main thing is you were good then, better now, so keep writing....just think about the new ones to be written.... Niah
Tiger_DanOPwarrington, Merseyside, England UKNov 11, 2010
Comments (20)
This site is rated PG!
Swan
I'm a newcomer to the site, but I know how I'm shocked when I look back on my poetry written a year ago....the main thing is you were good then, better now, so keep writing....just think about the new ones to be written....
Niah
Hope your well
You seem to have captured a moment of time never to slip away,
Beautiful.
this one just makes me laugh now! lol
Excellent comment! Thank you very much!
Hope your well