Make Love

Clinched in this moment, and forever in this daze
I touch her soft hands, as we take to the sky stage
I feel her naked body, moving closer, becoming freely
Heart, racing with passion, she starts to slowly tease me

We lay beneath the sheets, my body starts to tremble
My sense for how she makes me feel, begins to re assemble
Our minds are on a level term, the heat slowly drifts eternal
With passion and love in this moment, ecstacy turns to inferno
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Posted: Nov 2009
About this poem:
Hi ALL.

A few thoughts into words.......Please tell me what you think and comment

Thanks
Tiger

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Sunnn
teddybear teddybear teddybear
Tiger_Dan
teddybear teddybear sad flower sad flower yay
Tiger_Dan
blushing blushing blushing kiss kiss kiss
Goddess72
Ooh Daniel~~~



teddybear heart1 heart beating heart wings love smitten
Tiger_Dan
yes godess.........what are u thinking????bouquet
Goddess72
Oh! I can't tell you that! Ha,Ha!
This site is rated PG!lips lips lips lips
Tiger_Dan
haha................glad you like it!!!bouquet
Tiger_Dan
Funny how lookin bk on this site and thru my poems takes you to different stages that you have had......crazy stuff!
Swan87
Nice , Hot Poem Tiger cheers Liked it thumbs up

Swan
Redex
Yes tiger welcome back nice poem, yes I do the same look back at what I did a year ago, we move onbeer
niah9
Hi.
I'm a newcomer to the site, but I know how I'm shocked when I look back on my poetry written a year ago....the main thing is you were good then, better now, so keep writing....just think about the new ones to be written....
Niahwave bouquet
Tiger_Dan
thanks Niah good comment

Hope your well
Ladybee42
nice write - love is good!
bouquet bouquet
cryeyes
full of passion indeed!!!lips lips lips
purpledragonfly
Hello Tiger Dan. I thought your poem was well written.
You seem to have captured a moment of time never to slip away,
Beautiful.wave
Tiger_Dan
Thank you for the comments.....means so much!

this one just makes me laugh now! lol yay
Tiger_Dan
Thanks for the message dragonfly......hope your well
Odette67
Oh dear, I just had a shower lol, love the poem. yay
Tiger_Dan
rolling on the floor laughing rolling on the floor laughing rolling on the floor laughing rolling on the floor laughing rolling on the floor laughing rolling on the floor laughing rolling on the floor laughing rolling on the floor laughing rolling on the floor laughing

Excellent comment! Thank you very much!

Hope your well
Tiger_Dan
Thank you purple dragon
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