by socrates44San Fernando, Trinidad and Tobago
Sep 2013 1,199 Views 19 comments
Nature Portraits 1 - Waterfall, Thunderstorm
The thunderous roar of a mighty waterfall
cascading down in huge torrents of liquid fury
smashing into the water below
creating mists of water droplets
that transform the sunlight into a rainbow
The awesome power of a thunderstorm at night
with jagged bolts of lightning
that split the darkness
and light up the surroundings
with blinding dazzling intensity
cascading down in huge torrents of liquid fury
smashing into the water below
creating mists of water droplets
that transform the sunlight into a rainbow
The awesome power of a thunderstorm at night
with jagged bolts of lightning
that split the darkness
and light up the surroundings
with blinding dazzling intensity
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Posted: Sep 2013
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Comments (19)
The "Awesome power " of nature can be truly breathtaking .
Warm regards -F
Thank you. I appreciate your kind comment. Nature has several sides which includes its awesome power as against its peaceful serenity as you know. Each has its own beauty.
Best wishes! Have a nice day!
You are right. I thought about the "rainbow" part when I was composing the piece but decided to stay with the 4 line format. I will add a special line to the first 4 just for you:
"that convert the sunlight into a rainbow".
Hope you enjoy it.
Thanks for your comment!
with these two marvelous themes
i carve them and you wrote them in unison. . . beautiful is simply the lowest praise for this. .x.x..x
this reminded me of a family visit years ago
... while hiking, we came upon a gorgeous fall
Ty for your write
Thanks for your kind comment.
Have a nice day!
I am glad you enjoyed the piece. Thanks for your comment. A waterfall is indeed gorgeous sight as you have said.
Have a nice day!
I decided to bring in the "rainbow" which I had also thought about before and adjusted the "waterfall" piece accordingly. I also adjusted the "thunderstorm" to match.
Thanks for your suggestion.
Have a nice day!
Kathy
Cat
Thanks for your kind commendation.
Take Care.
Thanks for your wonderful assessment of the piece.
Best regards.
Thanks, my fellow Nature lover,
No need to be fearful of the thunderstorms.
After all, you are godsprincess.
Thanks for your lovely comment.
Kind Regards.
what I said may sound off hand lowly
what I wanted to convey was it's beyond anything worthy I can say ... speechless and breathless