by any other name (40 word challenge)

a maze made of lips
blossoming from hips
petals to shape her eyes
look on Autumn skies
making lines for every curve
with worship which love deserves
so slowly as the minds ascent
lingering in the absence of your scent
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Posted: Nov 2013

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Comments (8)

Yankee4you
Now that's a very sensual, creative use of 40 words my friend....well done!! handshake
beautifulyou
awesome elo,
very very beautiful! flower
trurorob
Thanks for this my friend, very well crafted piece.
Rob
rapturecapture
Hi elo

bowing so so sweet...really lovely.bouquet

Thank you for sharing

Martina xxx hug kiss angel wave
darkhorse555
beautifully crafted pieceangel
Macduff5
Hi elo,

Beautiful choice of imagery in this one. Well crafted in 40 words. cheers
sundayrose1
always captivating elo
thanks
soulgoddess
wine Awesome imagery.... keep writing! angel
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