The Storm

The storm passed close
Too close for comfort
And a breeze foul did blow
It threatened the ship
Indeed it rocked
As if struck a mighty blow....
I felt afraid and wanted to run
For comfort and shelter down below
Nay, I stood fast and cupping a hand
I yelled for my love to show
Please dear God
Do not take him from me now
As fear gripped my heart
And made it icy cold
I wondered if he'd abandoned ship
And left me all alone
The tears they flowed
But still I stood
Until I felt that my feet
Had turned to chunks of wood
And then from somewhere
Maybe the stern
My love he answered me
And as he walked back to me
My heart began to burn
I held him tight against my breast
And only then...
Were my fears laid to rest
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Posted: Nov 2013

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Poetnumber1
Dear Diane, the storms may come in different directions. It sometimes test the strength of one's love and resilience to stand firm amidst it all. But thankfully your lover was right there to lay your fears to rest, may you hold him forever . Excellent stuff my dear!bouquet :)
Redex
Beautiful poem twosome is sure better than alonesome.teddybear
darkhorse555
a delightful beautiful piece enjoyed angel
diana_1
thank you Red ever so much for your comment.... sure twosome is better:) hug
diana_1
Poet, you are ever so right.... the storms will come but I will continue to hold him tight, thank you for your lovely words.....teddybear
diana_1
Ahh, Liam 'tis the stuff stories are made from... but yes delightful isn't it? I thank you for your lovely comment... Catch up with you soon...wave
Serenity4two
Diana , this is very emotional and moving hug
but rest assured all will be ok thumbs up
Every relationship must weather a few storms -but the strength of the bond between two will get you through to calmer waters -
Warm regards - F hug
SweetnNeat
Hi Diana, love will always find a way in any storm to survivethumbs up A lovely poemthumbs up full of hope and courage
gnj4u
Hi, diana_1,
And only then...Were my fears laid to rest ...It's always comforting when one's relationship can weather The Storm. Sometimes, it does pay to stand still and wait. Thanks for sharing.
Yankee4you
Diana, very clever use of metaphor....love survives...hug
Macduff5
Hi Diana,

Nicely done and says a good deal more than the literal. wine bouquet
diana_1
Fiona....loved hearing from you...thank you and continue to be blessedwave
diana_1
Sweet, it is good to see you here thanks for your visit... and kind wordshandshake
diana_1
gnj4u, lovely and encouraging words, my friend.....wave thanks.....
diana_1
yankee, It is good to have you come.....thank you.....wave
diana_1
Macduff, you are most kind.....thank you....and yes so true...wave
trurorob
True love will always weather the storms, delightful read
Rob
diana_1
Thank you Rob, yes true love does conquer all things... thank you...... wave
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