Linda, I dream of hitting the lottery!...but would forgo all the money and the endless drudgery, for love's bliss. Interesting twist...Good work "Teach"! Robert
Poetnumber1St James, Port of Spain Trinidad and TobagoJan 22, 2014
Clever write Linda. I like the sudden transition of thoughts.
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We go from being a Victim of drudgery to meeting a saviour...Well that sounds like heaven to me
Great poem...loved it
Thank you for sharing
Martina xxx
SR
Brilliant my friend -well done ! F
Interesting twist...Good work "Teach"!
Robert