The Follower

He stalks through the dark streets and lanes
looking, searching for a victim
seeing a likely women he follows
for days he watches her routine

Once satisfied he makes his plans
then sets aside all he will need
tomorrow is when he will act
he takes pleasure thinking on it

The following night he is there
goes to the door rings her bell
she opens it and is surprised
quickly he ushers her inside

Shaking in terror, do not hurt me
is the tearful plea, she stutters
no my dear you have it all wrong
I was tasked to check you out

You see you are now an heiress
your grandfather leaves a fortune
to who fills his will conditions
I am pleased to say you do

Now all you need to do is sign here
and all his possessions are yours
with a squeal she gave him a hug
her saviour from drudgery
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Posted: Jan 2014

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rapturecapture
Hi Shadow

We go from being a Victim of drudgery to meeting a saviour...Well that sounds like heaven to me applause grin laugh

Great poem...loved it

Thank you for sharing

Martina xxx hug angel bouquet wave
sundayrose1
A different write Shadow. Thanks for the read.

SRbouquet
Serenity4two
What a wonderful story and excellent uplifting ending to this poem Linda applause
Brilliant my friend -well done ! F hug bouquet
darkhorse555
beautifully penned as always linda excellent pieceangel wine
Ravensgold
Hey, I enjoyed this one Shadowlaugh ...nice twist at the end!wine
shadow1950
lol Martina it does rather. Ty glad you enjoyed nah no drudgery for you hug wine kiss
shadow1950
a bit yes SR ty hug wine bouquet
shadow1950
hi Fiona ty your comments inspire hug wine kiss
shadow1950
hi Raven the mischievous twist lol glad you enjoyed it hug wine kiss
shadow1950
so kind of you Liam ty pal hug wine kiss
TAR_734
Linda, I dream of hitting the lottery!...but would forgo all the money and the endless drudgery, for love's bliss.angel
Interesting twist...Good work "Teach"!thumbs up
Robert
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Poetnumber1
Clever write Linda. I like the sudden transition of thoughts.
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