In Spring

by phoenixFHPuxi, Shanghai, China

Apr 2014 351 Views 7 comments

In Spring

Spring is coming
when cool wind blowing ;

Spring is coming
when light rain falling ;

Spring is coming
when warm Sun beaming ;

Spring is coming
when faint fragrance floating ;

Far and near
echoed with birds singing;

Here and there
decorated with new green ;

Then now again
the new leaves whispered in the wind:
Yes ,the Spring is coming really!

For all of these
how can I not to praise you!

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Posted: Apr 2014

About this poem:

Thoughts in rain, try to write down but am not a good writer.I want to learn... So please bear with me.Thanks.

PS: The typical Spring days in Shanghai drizzled often mixed with fallen leaves ... Sometimes you can walk on street with no umbrella and can enjoy this misty rain as well ...

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Comments (7)

candykidAshburn, Virginia USAApr 20, 2014

Meili de xi. Wo hen rongxing jian dao ni.

Odette67Penrith, Cumbria, England UKApr 20, 2014

Then now again
the new leaves whispered in the wind:
Yes ,the Spring is coming really!

This is so lovely my dear, you keep writing.

phoenixFHOPPuxi, Shanghai ChinaApr 21, 2014

Candykid:

Thanks! Ye hen rong'xing jian dao ni.It's amazing that you know our Pinyin.

phoenixFHOPPuxi, Shanghai ChinaApr 21, 2014

Hi, Odette:

Thanks for your supporting ! My dear friend .This is my first time to write, hope it's not the last.I will try writing when I am not too busy.