angel dying

with no more wings to fly you find your self in torment again you cry your tears of pain you look for your life in a dream of people but people sometimes push you off the world your back in the grey again fighting your self in the shadows you once was a goddess of love your life has been striped away where is your angel nowyou have been left alone falling every second you are defeated by death and your demons cutting into your skin you are now a ghost of what you once was your an angel dying a spirit falling a dream broken a faith lost you the shadows the grey the dying rivers torment i am to blame for your demise you loved me so innocent i hated you so innocent so let me die a painfull death and fall back into your torment
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Posted: Jan 2010
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please understand this poem is not against religion of any kind are any people

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Comments (1)

trurorob
Poetry john is about free expression, you have the right to say what you feel it is called poetic license.
If I may, you should look at the way you lay out your poems, try to gain lines and Stanzas (IE verses). This is one hell of a mouthful without a full stop.
Not trying to tell you what you should do, but this is a comments section and I mean it in the best possible way.
Rob
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