EMPTY BOTTLE WITH A LETTER

I used to be free and inspired-by-life person,
I'd go anywhere and can go with anyone.
For me, life is yet blooming and riping fruit,
with this age of me, I still find what I could.

I can still remember, when I can write poems,
just inspired with young love, with no major problems.
But now, what happened when you left me all alone,
You were just there, but now you are already gone.

I gave my equal share in our relationship,
but what you gave me was hurt and twice 'a cheat.
Trusted you a lot, but you took it for granted,
went against the current, to make you feel wanted.

I was even always there when you were so sad,
chose to see you with your best, and ignored the bad.
Wish I saw it coming when they told me to run,
run as fast as I can, and made an early end.

Now I am just an empty bottle in a case,
One of the innocent, one of the preys,
But, Hey you! Yes, you! Man who's coward predator,
I'm coming back and get what you have to pay for.

You can never step on me again, well never!
I'm now a wise girl, and even more a clever.
For that man who's drunk with pride, never a giver,
Revenge inside, this empty bottle with a letter.
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Posted: Aug 2014
About this poem:
A cheesy bitter sweet poem. Hahaha. I can't even think why I wrote this. XD

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Comments (2)

123whisper
Oh dear,heart felt poem.I feel for every broken heart that gave so much and ignored the rad worning signes than left you with emthy bottle...To go true healing process we go true many stages before coming out where it doesn't hurt so much and in being wise we need to balance our thoughts to seek peace within ourselfs and outside world.
Thank you for sharing.Wishing you best of luck hug
kody18
Hi Ms. 123whisper, thank you for appreciating my poem. Six years ago when I wrote my last poem, luckily I still have the rhyming words with me. I'm glad to have some people appreciate it. Anyways thank u again. Wish you a great life :)
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