Gathers, born in clouds, Mingles, life is short, it flies, Dies, on window pane.
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Posted: Jun 2009
About this poem:
This is a Haiku, one of mine, the only poetry that could motivate me in my school days .... Now, of course that i am a tad older and maybe wiser, i wonder was it anything to do with its length and the amount of syllables in relation to my attention span !! LOL !!
I enjoyed this and the way it was written. You had a gift at a young age. Thanks for sharing. Bless You. Peace and Hugs!
RedexNorthumberland, England UKMar 25, 2012
No Haiku is not easy it is beautiful form of poetry, it takes a real art to master it, as you have done, I like the way you put life and weather together as that is just how we live and die.
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