Blank space

There was a time when it just a time, Even there always memory in it
When you gave that time I thought I'll be even I knew there is no me
But you gave me that little space
It bring me a hope

If you don't wanna be in, why you let me in?, you & your world with them but there is no me, even never me in

I won't take apart if there is no space you gave me, I won't run this far if there is no hope
There is no me for you as I just passed time that you just cross it

If only you didn't give me that space then I won't in
Did I ask you many time about that?
Will be more fair for me if you say no rather than you gave the blank space that only me stand there and you with others

#cully 20 jan'2016
Blank space
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Posted: Jan 2016
About this poem:
Its about honesty in relationship

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doglover14
Lavina

How beautiful this is...but how so very sad.

Why do men seemingly lead us on, when they know there is no chance for 'forever'.

Mady
lavina
@doglover: well they seem like to have fun by playing with our feeling. They said we compicated but actualy they who make it complicated
doglover14
Maybe they still feel like hunters, and he more prey or victums they can accumulate signifies to them that are more of a man.

Mady
lavina
Guess some of them still have child side feeling who still like to playing
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