at dark shore

OdaMae

by OdaMaeRio de Janeiro, Brazil

Feb 2019 324 Views 3 comments

at the dark shore

Author: OdaMae

i feel the distance
and it says "farewell"

at the sinister shore
i just can see shadows

but the long valley
and the torturous road

nobody around me

just some trees can listen my cry

so i walk and i walk
and suddenly i cross the long and evil road

~ ~ ~ ~ ~

Posted: Feb 2019

About this poem:

feelings and emotions

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Comments (3)

trurorob

trurorobAlicante, Valencia SpainFeb 3, 2019

Nicely done, very emotional.
Rob

OdaMae

OdaMaeOPRio, Rio de Janeiro BrazilFeb 4, 2019

I had wrote it when I got sad.

Nuwahri61

Nuwahri61mackay, Queensland AustraliaFeb 5, 2019

Hi OdaMae............There is a lot of depth in this simple but lovely poem ..........nice thoughts ........Regards NU

....PS ....nice to meet you here

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