I give up on you, on us, on me. I give up on love, on life, on hope. I give up on care, on want, on need. I give up on God, on Jesus, on faith. I accept the dark, the death, the end.
kizzy27a south coast beach, New South Wales AustraliaJul 23, 2009
I was trying to figgure out what this poem was about but
I gave up .......
runawayJakarta, IndonesiaJul 23, 2009
I sense sadness and hopelessness in the poem "I give up". You chose simple words to express all that going on inside. I am not sure if it just a poem or some deep thoughts swirling into a tornado inside your head. I pray all is well for you.
angelmarzperth, Western Australia AustraliaJul 24, 2009
that was depressing...can you give us an insight into how and why you came about writing this?...hopefully your not dead, and you can answear...
darren9030Peterborough, Cambridgeshire, England UKJul 24, 2009
Crikey how depressing - was that supposed to make us feel better
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I gave up .......