my poem composeed by me its sunils poem

i walked alone on the path of life
i dont know how many friends i get here and how many friends given their company to me ??
and how many left me on the half of the path of life ?


urs blurred promis i was rembering andi was going on

on the path of life
my heart was saying to trust on u and ur promish
but i was alone i was walking on the path of life
i was finding u but u havent meet me there i was alone
my eyes were crying in ur memories
but my heart was rembering ur promish tht u did to me

lastly when i saw mirror on the path of life my heart said again ur just walking alone on the path of life
wht happend ur crying wht happend ur wishpred with too many pains shll not hve to come ur alone and see ur dying alone





thx
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dont forget to close the door behind you , or were you born in a tent banana
sorry what do mean uncle????and wht u want to sayapplause applause applause applause applause applause banana banana banana banana banana banana head banger head banger head banger head banger head banger head banger head banger head banger head banger head banger head banger
You wrote this in your love's memory...how lovely.
put your shirt on , this is a family show , just pulling your leg with old wives tales , hows things where you are wave
thx for looking me but ur really nice just like an ideal father and i respect u but tht is my modeling pick ,, by the way u r soo cool uncle , mmay ised u friend requst, im from india
thx kittens i just worte this for u and for my friends
yes you can wave
Sweet. Did you ever approach the pretty girl you wrote about?? I have been wondering....I still think you should just smile and say hello.
you have a very big heart. That is a very nice poem and I hope your friends are proud of you for writing it.
hii thx yacks ur soo handsome friend nice to meet u
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