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a poem I wrote when I was 13... re-edited

Leave today and I will follow
Say you'll come tomorrow and I will wait forever
I want to spend eternity with you
Don't let me go, and I will not let you go
Hold me and I will hold you
Look inot my eyes and I will look into yours
Don't forget me becuse I will never forget you
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DRSharma
DRSharma●kathmandu, Central Nepal Nepal
Feb 8, 2009●2 Comments
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Dear friend,
It is not only your feelings you touched everyone feelings. Keep your creativeness.

DR Sharma
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geminiman61
geminiman61●nottingham, Nottinghamshire, England UK
Feb 9, 2009●2 Comments
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Fantastic it bought a tear to my eye maybe because i feel down after a break up and it cut like a knife straight to my heart thanks for putting my feelings into words hope you have made a fortune out of your words because you have or had a real talent
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