A poem of my own (2)
Gabriel, kudos to you for creating something from nothing and having the nerve to post it for all the world to see.
Keep up with your writing because the more you do, the better you will get at it. There are many good poets on this site and they would be happy to criticize your work and give you a few pointers to make it even better.
Keep up with your writing because the more you do, the better you will get at it. There are many good poets on this site and they would be happy to criticize your work and give you a few pointers to make it even better.
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Ive only got one liver.
I enjoy my life fully there is no harm in that.
I would defend my friends I would go to bat.
I would stick up for them no matter what.
Even if they got themselves in a rut.
I find my writing may seem odd.
Im not one to brag about my bod.
I love to listen and love to cheer.
Remember when I am with you lets have a beer.
I don't think its wrong to smoke.
Everyone says its no joke.
What do they no not very much.
Im glad I started and this is such.
I do what I want and I hope you don't care.
Cause Ill be your friend anywhere.
Just call me up and give me a ring,
I don't mean the stuff thats called bling.
I am as simple as they come and thats why I am me,
And thats the way I want to be.
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