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Mar 27, 2011 10:41 PM CST A woman's Worth......If only we could achieve this!!!
ClearlyStated
ClearlyStatedClearlyStatedNorth Bay, Ontario Canada15 Threads 1 Polls 489 Posts
She understands her ability to give to others
She knows herself from within
She sees her role in life before her
Her view is one of an open act
Offering the people around her a sense of well being and positive outlook
Her opinions are possessed of wisdom and strength
Her love is beyond any given
She offers support, compassion and empathy while always standing by her word
She savours the attention & affection bestowed upon her
She listens to the views of another

Her man is caring, unselfish, worthy,honoured & respected
He shows her his love through his words of encouragement & unconditional actions.
He is selfless in his purpose, only considering her while she honours him.
His purpose is to please and make her smile, his meaning hides in the depth of his soul.

She speaks of success and achievements while being selfless in her opinions
She understands his actions of affection and support
She defends his honour and self perseverance

He smiles and is contented in her presence
He cherishes her thoughts and opinions
She is wise in her words
He honours her amongst others
She savours his efforts

His purpose is to offer his love through his actions and words
Her meaning is to see his purpose

While times are tough, they hold firm together with encouraging and supportive words despite the world around them

Her tears of pain become his anguish and sorrow
His uncertain thoughts become her grace of love and affection
They are like no other, they are firmly intertwined in thought, actions, body and soul

A woman's worth is within her
Only understood by those who know her well
Only appreciated by the ones who love her most
A woman's worth is beyond the outside world but embedded in her spirit, with understanding of her own self worth and self respect.


Yes I wrote this about 3 years ago, do you think this is possible to achieve??
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Mar 27, 2011 10:45 PM CST A woman's Worth......If only we could achieve this!!!
Ccincy
CcincyCcincyCincinnati, Ohio USA77 Threads 20,535 Posts
I think that anyhting is possibe.


I feel I have already achieved most of it.
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Mar 27, 2011 10:50 PM CST A woman's Worth......If only we could achieve this!!!
ClearlyStated
ClearlyStatedClearlyStatedNorth Bay, Ontario Canada15 Threads 1 Polls 489 Posts
Ccincy: I think that anyhting is possibe.I feel I have already achieved most of it.


Very awesome....I like to think I have.....at one point in my life!! Maybe that's why I wrote it!! I don't know....dunno
I was going through alot emotionally with my ex bf at the time and well......I worte my thoughts down and that is what I came up with!!
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Mar 27, 2011 10:51 PM CST A woman's Worth......If only we could achieve this!!!
mnowsa
mnowsamnowsaRajshahi, Rajshahi Division Bangladesh145 Threads 3 Polls 7,536 Posts
well, on a serious note, i don't think men are fully designed and programmed to understand the worth of women. therefore, whatever a woman says about her worthiness, i will simply agree with her.peace
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Mar 27, 2011 10:52 PM CST A woman's Worth......If only we could achieve this!!!
ClearlyStated
ClearlyStatedClearlyStatedNorth Bay, Ontario Canada15 Threads 1 Polls 489 Posts
mnowsa: well, on a serious note, i don't think men are fully designed and programmed to understand the worth of women. therefore, whatever a woman says about her worthiness, i will simply agree with her.
rolling on the floor laughing well good point and good point lollaugh
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Mar 27, 2011 10:53 PM CST A woman's Worth......If only we could achieve this!!!
Ccincy
CcincyCcincyCincinnati, Ohio USA77 Threads 20,535 Posts
ClearlyStated: Very awesome....I like to think I have.....at one point in my life!! Maybe that's why I wrote it!! I don't know....
I was going through alot emotionally with my ex bf at the time and well......I worte my thoughts down and that is what I came up with!!


Sometimes it helps to write it down too.

Won't go into the details but one time years and years ago I wrote my father a letter forgiving him for what he did to me.Then I burned it.
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Mar 27, 2011 10:55 PM CST A woman's Worth......If only we could achieve this!!!
mnowsa
mnowsamnowsaRajshahi, Rajshahi Division Bangladesh145 Threads 3 Polls 7,536 Posts
ClearlyStated: well good point and good point lol


what can i say lovely lady? i will tell you a secret...





















i am afraid of my mother and sisteruh oh rolling on the floor laughing
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Mar 27, 2011 11:05 PM CST A woman's Worth......If only we could achieve this!!!
icecreaman84
icecreaman84icecreaman84Dracut, Massachusetts USA5 Posts
I totally believe this is possible to achieve! There are men in the world who are what you've described within your poem as well as woman you have described within your poem. The problem is that they are far and few between and and even further and fewer between as partners! but with an open mind, a positive attitude and an open heart you will find the man that you speak of and as long as your the woman that you speak of then you will have a long lasting, beautiful relationship that will be well the worth the time and effort!

P.S. I am still looking for that woman in your poem but know she is out there! sad flower
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Mar 27, 2011 11:08 PM CST A woman's Worth......If only we could achieve this!!!
ClearlyStated
ClearlyStatedClearlyStatedNorth Bay, Ontario Canada15 Threads 1 Polls 489 Posts
icecreaman84: I totally believe this is possible to achieve! There are men in the world who are what you've described within your poem as well as woman you have described within your poem. The problem is that they are far and few between and and even further and fewer between as partners! but with an open mind, a positive attitude and an open heart you will find the man that you speak of and as long as your the woman that you speak of then you will have a long lasting, beautiful relationship that will be well the worth the time and effort!

P.S. I am still looking for that woman in your poem but know she is out there!


Wowww well said......I hope you find her and would like to think I am who I wrote about....dunno
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Mar 27, 2011 11:15 PM CST A woman's Worth......If only we could achieve this!!!
icecreaman84
icecreaman84icecreaman84Dracut, Massachusetts USA5 Posts
ClearlyStated: Wowww well said......I hope you find her and would like to think I am who I wrote about....


Well for you to have written that poem says a lot about you as a person! I would have to say that you are that woman! and with that said I hope to find you twin sister...... grin
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Mar 27, 2011 11:19 PM CST A woman's Worth......If only we could achieve this!!!
ClearlyStated
ClearlyStatedClearlyStatedNorth Bay, Ontario Canada15 Threads 1 Polls 489 Posts
icecreaman84: Well for you to have written that poem says a lot about you as a person! I would have to say that you are that woman! and with that said I hope to find you twin sister......


Well Thank you very much.......blushing
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Mar 27, 2011 11:26 PM CST A woman's Worth......If only we could achieve this!!!
icecreaman84
icecreaman84icecreaman84Dracut, Massachusetts USA5 Posts
ClearlyStated: Well Thank you very much.......


Well your "very beautiful" and very welcome! love
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Mar 27, 2011 11:29 PM CST A woman's Worth......If only we could achieve this!!!
ClearlyStated
ClearlyStatedClearlyStatedNorth Bay, Ontario Canada15 Threads 1 Polls 489 Posts
icecreaman84: Well your "very beautiful" and very welcome!
blushing
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Mar 27, 2011 11:37 PM CST A woman's Worth......If only we could achieve this!!!
icecreaman84
icecreaman84icecreaman84Dracut, Massachusetts USA5 Posts
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Mar 27, 2011 11:38 PM CST A woman's Worth......If only we could achieve this!!!
ClearlyStated
ClearlyStatedClearlyStatedNorth Bay, Ontario Canada15 Threads 1 Polls 489 Posts
Well if I MUST say.........blushing ..............you're not too shabby yourself!!bouquet
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Mar 27, 2011 11:41 PM CST A woman's Worth......If only we could achieve this!!!
icecreaman84
icecreaman84icecreaman84Dracut, Massachusetts USA5 Posts
hug Well thank you......
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Mar 27, 2011 11:43 PM CST A woman's Worth......If only we could achieve this!!!
ClearlyStated
ClearlyStatedClearlyStatedNorth Bay, Ontario Canada15 Threads 1 Polls 489 Posts
rose for you!blushing ............omg I'm really blushing
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Mar 27, 2011 11:59 PM CST A woman's Worth......If only we could achieve this!!!
solitare
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Thread: A woman's Worth......If only we could achieve this!!!
Category: Poems, Quotes, Writing
Thread Author: ClearlyStated
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"Yes I wrote this about 3 years ago, do you think this is possible to achieve??"



You must be an aspiring science-fiction/ fantasy writer. Good try but it won't be a Best seller' as most people won't be able to relate to it, but nice try...NEXT!laugh


Seriously, I applaud the sentiments but it unfortunately does sound like fantasy...women around this entire globe are still basically regarded as 'inferior' and much worse both in private and even in public. This lingering attitude can be very clearly seen and heard in low to moderate income groups who are usually also severely under-educated and barely above the the barely literate stage which in North America is viewed as being somehow virtuous in a 'folksy way'; anything/ anyone above those levels do not count as they are regarded as lynching material, as are people who are not certifiable 'red-necks'. They only exist to drink, make illegitimate children by running away getting into more bar fights, finding another trailer court with a similar class female and repeating the whole circle again. There is reality and it will never change because it is their constitutional right not to.American society as a whole will never progress beyond the confines of a trailer court and anyone who even tries is regarded as a traitor to their country and to their race by those types.
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Mar 28, 2011 12:03 AM CST A woman's Worth......If only we could achieve this!!!
ClearlyStated
ClearlyStatedClearlyStatedNorth Bay, Ontario Canada15 Threads 1 Polls 489 Posts
solitare: Thread: A woman's Worth......If only we could achieve this!!!
Category: Poems, Quotes, Writing
Thread Author: ClearlyStated
Post Author: ClearlyStated

"Yes I wrote this about 3 years ago, do you think this is possible to achieve??"
You must be an aspiring science-fiction/ fantasy writer. Good try but it won't be a Best seller' as most people won't be able to relate to it, but nice try...NEXT! Seriously, I applaud the sentiments but it unfortunately does sound like fantasy...women around this entire globe are still basically regarded as 'inferior' and much worse both in private and even in public. This lingering attitude can be very clearly seen and heard in low to moderate income groups who are usually also severely under-educated and barely above the the barely literate stage which in North America is viewed as being somehow virtuous in a 'folksy way'; anything/ anyone above those levels do not count as they are regarded as lynching material, as are people who are not certifiable 'red-necks'. They only exist to drink, make illegitimate children by running away getting into more bar fights, finding another trailer court with a similar class female and repeating the whole circle again. There is reality and it will never change because it is their constitutional right not to.American society as a whole will never progress beyond the confines of a trailer court and anyone who even tries is regarded as a traitor to their country and to their race by those types.


Hummmmmmmconfused Glad you liked it!!dunno Did ya? helpDidn't ya? wow ...............not too sure what you felt there!!! sigh but ok......thanks for the comment!!conversing
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Mar 28, 2011 11:56 PM CST A woman's Worth......If only we could achieve this!!!
savedbygrace3
savedbygrace3savedbygrace3San Mateo, California USA17 Threads 350 Posts
ClearlyStated,

Wow! This is truly a lovely poem. So much time, reflection, and
sincere emotion you've put into this.

Absolutely, I do believe its possible!

I long to have a relationship like the one you've
painted a picture of so vividly.

Have you written any others? Have you tried
to get any published?

You truly have a gift. Thank you for sharing with us.

Blessings,
saved
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