How I Got My Wings -- 'Tweren't Pretty (5)

Jun 7, 2013 7:40 AM CST How I Got My Wings -- 'Tweren't Pretty
CailinCallaghan
CailinCallaghanCailinCallaghanJennings, Florida USA4 Threads 173 Posts
Sage of Rage


Festering
in branches high,
discerning corruptions
proprieties disguised,
she apart, yet never alone
brooded contempt
with blackened eyes
and sooted soul
when but a child of five
“People rarely look up”
so she’d learned to climb.

Hatchin’ haint
in shadow’s caul.
Billowing malice
In enmity’s thrall~
pubescent Realm Cracker
Darkness embraced.
Summoning Thunder
she Willed
and she laid waste.
Her mind her sharpened saber
her tongue
spat judgment’s call
lest someone dare assuage her
she’d learned to appall.

Advancing
by the light
of the bridges
she did burn,
in the company of voices,
she heard
yet would not to learn.
Something reprehensible
into her heart
had crept,
distilling tears to fire
in solitude she wept.
Those she loved
came to avoid her.
Thus, at last,
she learned regret.

In an instant
rare and tender,
a revelation kindled new
compassion’s charity
and forgiveness~
an insight that saw through
the visage of disappointment
and thus gave place
that love would grow.
Her tattered heart
thus shattered
and she learned at last to sow
what she willed
to one day gather
A Sage of Rage
transformed
doth Know.


Callaghan Grant 5/24/2013
Jun 7, 2013 10:46 AM CST How I Got My Wings -- 'Tweren't Pretty
How much weed did that take? grin

Why can't people just say things more succinctly and say what they mean.

head banger
Jun 9, 2013 7:28 PM CST How I Got My Wings -- 'Tweren't Pretty
emerald888
emerald888emerald888wicklow, Wicklow Ireland2 Threads 1,054 Posts
Good translations approach that purpose. Bad translations never leave the starting line. cheering Keep them coming Ms. CC. wink
Jun 10, 2013 6:28 PM CST How I Got My Wings -- 'Tweren't Pretty
WESTERNSTAR1
WESTERNSTAR1WESTERNSTAR1†_ °_†, Cork Ireland8 Threads 5 Polls 3,490 Posts
Ronnie where are u ? crying this is all ur fault face !
Jun 20, 2013 10:06 PM CST How I Got My Wings -- 'Tweren't Pretty
CailinCallaghan
CailinCallaghanCailinCallaghanJennings, Florida USA4 Threads 173 Posts
emerald888: Good translations approach that purpose. Bad translations never leave the starting line. Keep them coming Ms. CC.


blushing Here's a new one for yaz, iff you're still about. May have to start a new thread with it.

King Fisher

She’d long mastered baiting--
knew well how to gauge
all that lay hidden
from the surficial stage.
In each phase of the foray,
with each line that she dropped
she plumbed depth and character:
currents below and aloft.
So she cast out down current
with just the right weight
a lure that would dazzle~
in sunlight titillate:
attracting pelagics
to the predator’s fate.
Then she wove nets of metaphor
and laid them out straight
as if she meant nothing by them
lest she make wary the prey.
Fine and taut she did stretch them
that they’d go unseen
well upsea of the reef
where she, fisher queen,
chose a pole, thick and mighty
to search the benthic for her King.

Callaghan Grant June 1, 2013


An Faolchu Gaelach
Queen of Cups
"Whom doth The Grail serve."
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